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newmanwalking69
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0 posted 2002-04-10 08:40 PM



i have seen death , i have felt death but is there way of dying without feel or seeing your death.drinking and driving you can see your death and feel your death. what would you rather have in you see death or feel death. i would rather die as a old person that has lived a life that knows that i knew it was time to go then drink, drive and die.drinking and driving never should be but its is there alot of death now a days like that and its happened it all of us. well i hope i have made you think cause that was my point of doing.drink....ok drive....fine but drink and drive....death

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-04-10 08:54 PM


Hello again. I love this poem because it says so much about a serious subject.
People drink and drive everyday without even thinking twice about it until it's too late and they are injured or injured someone else.
Very good and truthful poem

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2002-04-10 10:06 PM


You wrote about this so well! Hard topic but one that needs addressed. Great write!  


Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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