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Awaken Shiver's Sighs
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Awaken Shiver's Sighs |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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In depth of mind and soul that cries ‘gainst whispered thoughts in silken lies From thence the tongue does smoothly speak of moments strong in beauty seek. Does not the heart of man beat sure from chosen love seen flawless, pure When waves of flush do take the skin in surge of lust from deep within Were not the veil of sheer and light to guard within from eyes of sight the quiver of heart’s strongest beat in passions fire the flames then heat. Winds blown softly in ear’s desire in tunes to match the lover’s lyre. As souls caressed by finger’s graze awaken shiver’s sighs in sways. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Winds blown softly in ear’s desire in tunes to match the lover’s lyre. As souls caressed by finger’s graze awaken shiver’s sighs in sways. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *SIGH* Oh YES!! Love this Barry! This style is YOU! This is you at your finest. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is a wonderfully passionate poem, sweet friend, this too made my heart shiver imagining being with my dream girl! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Does not the heart of man beat sure from chosen love seen flawless, pure When waves of flush do take the skin in surge of lust from deep within MMMMMM...love this Barry...written with fleshtone ink  ~Victoria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You are getting better and better, enjoyed. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, Oh my word, this is utterly gorgeous, HALT! Stop right there, is it legal to have poetry this spectacular and wonderful? I think I shall have to protest this is just too perfectly divine darling boy, absolutely wonderful. There’s only one way for you to escape sentencing form the poetry police, and that’s to agree to write all my poems too. Well, why not? It seems a very reasonable request to me No one would mind darling boy honestly. Well, I wouldn’t anyway. As you know this nonsense is meant to distract from the fact this is an utterly excellent poem and I love it love it love it. Pure poetry As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy.....I felt the shudder of the sigh all the way down here....silly girl! Noah....yes, glad you liked it.. Seymour...we are trying, yes we are...Thankx Vic...hummmmmm, thought you might like this one... Mushy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You silly girl... OK, I will write it for you, if you insist! Thank You!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang....where ARE the words when I need them? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry So much talent and so much beauty I see through your words. This was lovely. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wonderful Barry, I love the last verse, Great writing, enjoyed reading it so much. floria Floria |
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