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Running Water |
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imagine315 New Member
since 2002-04-10
Posts 6 |
The headache drips and stain the white rug, Time peels the floor off your shoes. Walking enters the room, Spilling your drink. Untied knots no longer travel through your fingers, Leaking innocence walks on walls, Walls walk on the untrue. The wall falls, The headache stops. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Wow, I love the paralellism of emotions in this wonderful piece, sweet friend, this is a fabulous outstanding first post, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSs) Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) Ooohhhh...and please check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful work, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-10-2002 07:12 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow, i love the way you've written this poem! Very, very nice! I'll look for more from you! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions...enjoyed your words and hope you enjoy your visit with us..look forward to reading more of your poetry..  ~Victoria
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very interesting poem and use of images... Enjoyed....Welcome to Passions!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An excellent use of imagery...made me think you had the flu and were reaching for the Alka-Seltzer...Welcome to Passions! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love your imagery, imagine...  ... Too cute... Hang around awhile - You're gonna love this place...  |
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imagine315 New Member
since 2002-04-10
Posts 6 |
Thank you everyone for your kind responses and welcomes. I'll be posting many more and definately be checking as many poems as I can. ~*~Imagine~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I'm sure you will love it here! Relax, read and take a look around... I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Hugs and Smiles, Nancy~ |
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