Private Dance [an old favorite]

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-04-10 06:12 PM

Private Dance

He is waiting to read this,
she knows he is….
like a private letter, between them….
he in her world, she in his…

and he makes her want to be his private dancer…

in remote chance
remoter still the dance
but still, for the romance
she takes that stance
he'll stand the chance

and they to take the private dance
that one that won't e'er be seen
he'll call upon her in midnight dream
she'll float to him on wings unseen

to hold, then be held
in grace, be graced
she to smile
into his face
he to grasp
her warm embrace

he to take her up by small of back
and she to feel his shift and tact
his essence she breathes in
her perfume, a transient sin

her dress of roses pink in glow
in sheerest silk her skin does show
and length of limb to hip to shoulder
keeps the room from getting colder

and he in turn, in turn of crest
has worn in dream his very best
her hand lies there upon his chest
in silent beat of love's caress

in silence he reads of this, her dream
in close of eyes, then it seems
she's come to him, again, in romance
to take up this, this private dance
she'll take the stance
he'll stand the chance

for this one, most private, dance

01.27.01

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-04-10 06:26 PM

Sunshine,
A lovely dream, a lovely write.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-10 06:26 PM

BRAVO!!! This is a powerful, intimate vision of pure love, sweet friend, and may he always be lost in her world and she in his forever and ever in tango! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I am so happy you re-posted this classic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-04-10 06:48 PM

Karilea, I can see why this would be a favourite!
Great imagery, dances sensually down the page.
Thanks for the repost...
Glad I didn't miss this one!
~Hugs~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-04-10 06:55 PM

KJ...I am enjoying this poem a lot....Glad
you put this beauty back up where we could
all share it....very softly passionate and
a dance in itself!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-04-10 08:05 PM

hmmmmm so so lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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