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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-04-10 04:57 PM


“HEART BEATING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
My heart is a fragile
one, and it aches with
thoughts of you not
yet found…

In my dreams I
search for a gentle
woman to embrace,
sharing this passion
of romance within…

Place your head to
my chest, as I gently
place my touch to
your silken hair; listen
to this soft heart
beating, as it reaches
out to you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2002-04-10 05:00 PM


Oh! I love this bill..your words are melting upon these blue pages like chocolate syrup in the sun..mmmmm hugs

             ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-04-10 05:01 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, i too believe there is no feeling more happier than the beat of a lovers heart against ones own heart, I dream ever so much of feeling my Joannas heart beating to mine! (big hugggsssss) May you always share this happiness with your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-10 05:01 PM


Soft, romantic...as you do so well...
Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-04-10 05:05 PM


LOL@Victoria's reply!

This is truly beautiful Bill.
If I were closer
I would indeed
place my head
on your chest...
if just to hear..
the beat of your
romantic heart.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-04-10 05:18 PM


Bill darling boy this is Utterly utterly fabulous writing darling heart, I love it. This is so beautiful, the words trickling over the page like water flows over the beach. Absolutely excellent writing, I am awed by this wonder. It is absolutely fabulous. I could feel the sigh and the love swelling up, covering the heart with wonder

Outstanding writing darling girl outstanding

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-04-10 06:42 PM


Bill,
A good write, enjoyed the read.

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7 posted 2002-04-10 08:10 PM


Wonderful Bill, for every man there is a woman and I hope you find her. She will be lucky. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Nan
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8 posted 2002-04-10 08:33 PM


"Seek and ye shall find..."... so it's said.. Oh, romantic one..
Sven
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9 posted 2002-04-11 03:22 PM


you know BC, you've got to stop reading minds around here. . .

well done my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma
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10 posted 2002-04-11 03:35 PM


omg....my heart is beating...it just melt with your words. Swooning


((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-04-11 04:06 PM


Wonderful feelings shared...one of my favorites...James
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