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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Strange Waters He slid a word under her gently her bible belt slipped, undefined sensitivities peered over the edge into wonder allowing her hills and valleys by inclination to heave with quake alone she roamed Missouri no longer and Baja sand was not safe even when in waters ankle deep the riptide pulls even while he holds her with one more tanned word and the cocoanut oil glides with shine almost as slick as he [This message has been edited by Decaflame (04-10-2002 12:51 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Interesting and clever write, enjoyed. |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A flame burns here indeed. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Strange waters..or treacherous ones... either way nicely done.. Missouri Waters From gurgling bubble of hillside spring to clear bed flow over mossy stone it can be cold or rage in muddy anger when seasons change |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ This is WONDERFUL ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My my Deca...you are on a roll! Enjoyed this soooo much! Oh yes. ~Hugs~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca "He slid a word under her gently" Amazing how a word can change perception so easily. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I love that part of the country can see this tour with some gypsy and his guitar cool stuff deca |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yanno, I gotta get me some of those slippery words! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the way this one started especially |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is indeed very powerful, sweet friend, I too could envision New Orleans and the Pacific coast reading this and watching him and her strolling for each other on the beach sands, this is powerful! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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