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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-10 12:34 PM







~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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where the sky and horizon meet
1 posted 2002-04-10 12:38 PM



"Refreshing the all of me, in
slow-moving currents of the night"


Marge~ I love the title, "Waves of Rapture"...the rhyme and cadence are perfectly insinct with the content of this lovely poem sweet poetess.  

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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2 posted 2002-04-10 12:42 PM



Very good...a baptism such as this should leave one feeling quite blessed...

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3 posted 2002-04-10 12:43 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. Wonderful flow and rhythm as you seem to always do.

Oh how well I know this feeling, is soooooooooo utterly utterly fabulous darling heart. Beautiful artwork as always, perfectly complimented by your wonderful poetry


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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4 posted 2002-04-10 12:46 PM


This reminds me I've been missing more than ocean waves. Beautifully written, thanks for sharing  this refreshing wave of words.
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5 posted 2002-04-10 12:49 PM


enjoyed.

Eliza Simmons
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6 posted 2002-04-10 01:44 PM


Marge:  Such a haunting picture to go with your beautiful poem!  So effective together!

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7 posted 2002-04-10 01:47 PM


Fabulous!
AUTHOR!
AUTHOR!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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Thanks everyone ... I had the nicest individual replies prepared and suddenly got dumped.
I appreciate you ALL~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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9 posted 2002-04-10 03:21 PM


yes.....love that visual and the words lady..so fine your eyes see things.
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10 posted 2002-04-10 03:45 PM


Marge,
Wonderful write.

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11 posted 2002-04-10 04:06 PM


wow Marge! I am very impressed!
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12 posted 2002-04-10 04:50 PM


Aww, this is too sweet.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-04-10 08:22 PM


Marge this poem and picture are awsome. did you do the picture, wonderful visual and read. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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14 posted 2002-04-10 08:25 PM


Bowing most humbly to the Master Mistress of
pictures, poetry and imagery!!!!!

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15 posted 2002-04-10 08:30 PM


What a beautiful painting Marge and your words brushes the waves with strokes of passion
hugss

                      ~Victoria
              



"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)


[This message has been edited by Victoria (04-10-2002 08:31 PM).]

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16 posted 2002-04-10 08:57 PM


Marge, your sweet words always touch me. You write with such beauty.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2002-04-10 09:25 PM


You ALL are just the greatest ...
thank you so very much~
*Hugs*
Sincerely ... ~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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18 posted 2002-04-10 09:52 PM


The graphics lend power to your words Marge yet the ocean's swell paint tenderness and passion.
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19 posted 2002-04-10 09:55 PM


Marge, just an awesome write with an awesome pic written by an awesome writer What more can I say?

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2002-04-11 11:41 AM


I'm so thankful that I can share my word-thoughts with the wonderful poets here~
You all have just made my day !!!
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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21 posted 2002-04-11 12:28 PM


No, hon... you've made OUR day... as you do so often. *S* This is absolutely beautiful. *S*
Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2002-04-11 03:42 PM


SweetSuthernGal~
Well .... okay ... if you say so !
BUT ... I'm kind of extra fond of being a happy poetess today~

*AND my heart is filled with such GREAT joy at being here taking care of my little Delaney Delight today and tomorrow ~
WAHOO !  It's SOooooooooooooo fun to be a doting grandmother~

Delaney and I are 'La-La-Lahing' our way through the day~
She's an absolute ~
Love n' Hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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