Hooked shape poem Inspired by 'Deer's Hooked

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Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-04-10 12:02 PM

Hooked

you
cast your
line with such
finesse. Now I’m
in an awful mess
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I’m struggling against the
hook of you. Held enraptured
by  hope  of true.  Fighting  is
no  use  to  me.  I’m   hooked  by
wish  of  certainty. Wriggle  though
I surely do. There’s no release away
from  you. Feel me try to struggle free
Searching  for  my  destiny.  Let  me
swim  away  from this.  Don’t  hold me
captured by your kiss. I know it was
my own fault. I took the bait then
got caught. I swallowed every
little bit. Hung upon your
sparkling wit. Oh
what am I
supposed to do
now I’ve been
lllll hooked by you lllll
lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-10-2002 12:12 PM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-10 12:21 PM

He will be caught up by this one! Good job girl...your imagination is flying!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2002-04-10 12:25 PM

hehehe, I love it, I love it, I love it! Creativity just flies out of you!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2002-04-10 12:34 PM

sis,

i always knew you had talent and an
amazing gift but this even surpasses
my expectations of you! amazingly creative,
perfect rhyme all tied up with your usual wit. you should be VERY proud of this!! i
know i am...wonderful write sweet sis of
my heart. i love you!

love,
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-10 12:36 PM

(smiles) Oh Marsha, I just love all the creativity your heart shines with, you never cease to make me smile with the wonderful inspiration you hook! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-04-10 12:48 PM

Marsha,
I know your hooked, but I know he won't land you. LOL Beautiful write.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-04-10 12:51 PM

Marsha~
Reel him in !!!
He'll swallow this ... HOOK ... LINE ... and STINKER~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-04-10 04:54 PM

Marsha - I see Krissy taught you well with these shape poems. Of course the words are absolutely yours...

BC

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2002-04-10 06:23 PM

Well Marsha,
I knew that if pigs could fly, ham would go up but what happens when fish can fly? as it does in the shapely and spirited poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-04-10 06:45 PM

You are becoming an expert at these shape poems..loved it!

hugs
M

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2002-04-10 10:23 PM

Oh, mushy, you are such an apple
No hook for you - I'll use a grapple
I'll show you a reel good time
Instead of bait, I'll use my rhyme.
My rod will bend beneath your weight
But there is no escape from fate
I'll mount you right there on my wall..
A trophy to be seen by all!!!

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-04-10 10:43 PM

Well, it looks like he's got you, hook, line and sinker, Marsha.....
but thats because he thinks you are so beautiful and delicious....

I love the words and the shape...
You did this beautifully, Marsha...

~fishy hugs~

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"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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