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In love with you
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In love with you |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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In love with you (for Neha) I'm just dancing in pure blue Penning poetry with you As we whirl, you’re my girl Glowing brightly sparkling new. Gliding, sliding through the air Breathing gold dust ev'rywhere In a rainbow sky we fly On a stream of moonbeams, there. In my arms you're vapor dew As I glide along with you Here and there, everywhere 'Tis a fine romance we do, Because, I'm in love with you Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 10, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-10-2002 09:21 AM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Newell hi there, this is really lovely writing, it flows with such a lovely soft flow. Could this be any smoother? I don’t think so, excellent writing. Well done   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy  And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is wonderful, Newell  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Newell, This is so beautiful and pretty! Thanks for your lovely poem..:-) Neha |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Much enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is very lovely, sweet friend, your love always glistens in the words you write! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Newell this is beautiful I know she will love it. floria Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love it Newie Very bubbly |
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newmanwalking69 Junior Member
since 2002-04-10
Posts 10 |
wonderful love poem very bright and delightful to picture, wish i can read more later, but check out my poems too if you will thank you |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
Sweet and oh so romantic! Well done |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Newell, what can I say but I wish you well. Fine and beautiful write as always. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Krissy, this poem was written for my sister, Neha, in India. I am teaching her to write poetry and this was written to illustrate a number of poetry techniques. How many can you find? Just a fun question. Thank you for your kind words. ((Krissy)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Interloper. ((Interloper)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Vandana. ((Vandana)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Neha. Little sisters very easy to love and write for. I will mail you soon about what we can learn from this poem which expresses my love for you, sweet little one. I love you, lil sister, ((Newell)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Ceinwyn. ((Ceinwyn)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts, ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria, for your kind words. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Joanna, for your kind words. ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, newmanwalking69, for your reply. ((newmanwalking69)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Jeffrey, for your kind words. ((Jeffrey)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Sauni, for your kind words. ((Sauni)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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