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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-04-10 07:10 AM




Some days start in song
Sweet sunrise greets sparrow's sing
Softly, Kansas sighs

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-04-10 07:15 AM


Softly, softly Karilea, soft as a kiss, so soft it was feather light.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-04-10 07:22 AM


Some days start with rain
Pittering and pattering
Giving rise to blooms

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3 posted 2002-04-10 07:31 AM


you make my syllable count sigh  
Good Morning Sun


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4 posted 2002-04-10 07:40 AM


sunshine...

sun is still sleeping here..(shhhhh)
but I hear it will rise soon
and will reach all the way to kansas
with warm hand touch..

enjoyed the miniblind view

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5 posted 2002-04-10 08:45 AM


Karilea~

All days should start this way....Lovely view...HUGSSS




Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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6 posted 2002-04-10 08:48 AM




YAY!!! (smiles) I love hearinhg the sparrows sing in the morning so so much, they are my favorite birds because they always touch my heart with their symphonies and greet me to the sun always! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this is short yet radiates with such a powerful vision of nature, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-04-10 08:55 AM


Karilea...You make all our mornings brighter with your warm words!
~Morning Hugs~

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8 posted 2002-04-10 09:57 AM


some days start in echoes of the past
others start much too fast
still each starts with poetry
a way to bring you, here with me

good morning Sunshine!!

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9 posted 2002-04-10 10:01 AM


Kansas sighs softly
knowing Texas supports her
solid foundation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2002-04-10 02:29 PM




In the FLORIDA sunshine
Your thoughts spread a warming glow
Surely for sharing~


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2002-04-10 02:32 PM



Karilea, this is a soft beauty   You keep getting better and better!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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12 posted 2002-04-10 02:42 PM


Some days start with cats
Hair balls from mangy fur balls
What a lousy start!

psst, Karilea... I love your poem much better than mine

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13 posted 2002-04-10 03:54 PM


aaaahhhhhhh! I wanna go there, I wanna go!

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14 posted 2002-05-08 06:20 AM



You folks are great!  Thanks for taking the time to read...

Passing Shadows...c'mon out!

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15 posted 2002-05-09 06:33 AM


Ah so beautiful Sunshiny girl, this is so you
~HUGS~ Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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16 posted 2002-05-09 11:41 AM




Each day starts with you
When Vancouver arises
there is always Sun

Kansas Sunshine that is!  

We should spend less time on worrying when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start!

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17 posted 2002-05-09 12:22 PM


enjoyed
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18 posted 2002-05-09 12:29 PM


Good Morning, Sunshine!
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19 posted 2002-05-09 12:36 PM



What a delightful haiku this is, every morning should be like this!

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just out of reach
20 posted 2002-05-09 12:47 PM


So gentle!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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21 posted 2002-05-29 09:49 PM



You Pholks are Phenomenal...

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