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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-04-10 05:41 AM

wind dances
with tree arms
entwining whispers
with rustle sounds

a restless ocean
moans under the weight
of her lover sky
she grinds her sandy shore
against erect star ends

night grass
lays open bladed
fresh wet
from the lips of rain
that tongue tip kissed
deep between

we hold hands for a moment
before we become
the sea, the trees
the wet grass
the sigh songs

©Dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-10 07:00 AM

Are those palm trees I hear? No...Kansas winds...a different kind of sigh...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-04-10 07:24 AM

a restless ocean
moans under the weight
of her lover sky
she grinds her sandy shore
against erect star ends

night grass
lays open bladed
fresh wet
from the lips of rain
that tongue tip kissed
deep between
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Yowzers...Have mercy DS *L*
I need this kind of "calm" ... I need a vacation to this place

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-04-10 07:44 AM

Sunshine..thanks lady...mmmm good morning and yes palm trees are rubbing their tummies on the eave...little ocean eddy is playing in their leaves...humming bird has something sweet hidden under...just another boring day in so cal..

Janet Marie..bring a smile and some sunscreen...the sand there is like a blanket that warms you inside..and the ocean and the rocks are so naughty they way they act up all day..thanks babe

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

4 posted 2002-04-10 08:48 AM

Summer rocks
in suthern cal
pick one up
mossy green
lights up eyes
turn it around
summer rocks

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-10 08:51 AM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe there is no ore sensual beautiful sigh to nature then the swaying of plam trees on a tropical lagoon! (big hugggssss) I am truly becoming a huge fan of your work, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-04-10 09:01 AM

Noir, let me be a stone
that your hands turn to explore
let your breath be the winds
on my shimmer surface

thank you for the touch

Noah, welcome to my mind my friend
walk in the forest thoughts, run in the meadow paths..and thank you for your friendly footsteps

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-04-10 09:06 AM

Dark~Smiling at the same stanzas as JM.
Warm morning thoughts...indeed.
~Sighs & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-04-10 09:15 AM

this makes me think of early mornings at the coast, although mine is norcal, the effect is the same, and the way you spin sensuality into it, is perfect for the feel....you know I'm diggin this one

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-04-10 09:28 AM

DarkStranger~
I so enjoy the word-picture images that pop into my mind when I read you.

I happen to think you're an excellent poet and I'm so glad you're here~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2002-04-10 09:36 AM

Enchanting one thank you..I enjoy that smile and those thoughts.

SEA, yes you have different scenes there...but I think they speak the same lingo...thank you babe..have a wonderful day

Marge, you bless me with your eyes and your comments, and YOU are the poet..thank you for letting be be close.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-04-10 09:39 AM

I can see you on tv reporting the weather forecast ha..you would have alot of fans DS

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2002-04-10 10:27 AM

DS

Soon I am heading to the ocean...this poem makes me so homesick. Sometimes an hour is a lifetime. LOL at Victoria...but, she's right.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-04-10 10:45 AM

Dark Stranger,
A delicate and meaningful splash of paint. Enjoyed

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

14 posted 2002-04-10 11:57 AM

crash of lover's storm
begins with quiet gesture
tree fingers entwined

Indigo

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

15 posted 2002-04-10 12:00 PM

DS~Ohhh...I love it! I've never seen a landscape in that way. My mind still lingers on those images...I must go read it again!

Into my library it goes...
Now quick, send me directions to this place, I could use some of that!

Fabulous...
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

16 posted 2002-04-10 12:47 PM

This is an excellent piece of writing. You're one of the rare few that can take a moment and make our senses really live it. I'm so glad that you are a poet

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2002-04-10 02:45 PM

Victoria, thank you for your eyes my lady friend..I do enjoy your reviews

Ms Martie, thank you for looking in the window and dancing to the music....hugs neighbor

Sy, bless you for the review and comments, Thank you

Ms Honeybee...thank you for being a poetess and for loaning your eyes to my words.

Indigo, you weave me again, between your fingers of rhyme, leave me there for awhile
then leave with a whisper ...thank you lady

Smittykitty, you sweeten the day with your eyes and touch, thank you so much

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2002-04-10 04:15 PM

vivid description here! I love it!

newmanwalking69
Junior Member

since 2002-04-10

Posts 10

19 posted 2002-04-10 04:17 PM

wow! thats all i can say for that poem, i don't even know how to explain , but just wow! thank you for posting that poem is all i have to say as well. WOW!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

20 posted 2002-04-10 04:37 PM

Passing shadows, thank you so much for your words and moments to read.

Newman..thank you for the wows, and welcome again to passions

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

21 posted 2002-04-10 07:50 PM

you're a real writer. There you go - that's a true compliment yanno.

Superb work.

K

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

22 posted 2002-04-10 07:52 PM

Wonderful writing Dark stranger, great lines, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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