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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She said we’d been to first grade together I took her word for it years later when we met…again the television on, muted Jackson Browne playing, ‘Stay’ and I did for as long as she wanted me she was the first girl who ever wrote me poetry |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Sounds like your hooked to me!  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Awwww Duncan....How special....  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Oooohhhh, I like it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Glad it wasn't Ray Charles playing "Hit the Road, Jack"! A very delicate touch here, Sir Duncan  |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Duncan~ A tender thought, caught and splashed onto the page, ready to jump into our hearts. Very touching  Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I think we always have fond memories of the first person to write us poetry don’t we? I recall a one room bedsit, and reading what he wrote. Still brings a smile to my face all these years later. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Jackson Browne playing, "Stay" and I did for as long as she wanted me she was the first girl who ever wrote me poetry =============================== and me thinks she wont be the last  ya knew I was gonna love this one didnt ya. ya cant ever go wrong with JB very very cool write D. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, you must feel so lucky to have someone write poetry to you like that before! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, this touches some sweet memories for me I think I still have the first poem a guy ever wrote me tucked away in a shoe box....this made me remember his smile, thank you Cowboy for the walk down memory lane and the song that will be stuck in my head today |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
My sister worked with a guy who said he was in her 7th grade class with her but she didnt remember..this was about twenty five years later ha..anyway they dated for a while but didnt work out..enjoyed Duncan very sweet~Victoria
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Enjoyed, good write. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sweet too bad I can't dip my toes in the nostalgic pool with that one..because uhh nobody really has written me a poem..well maybe one person did but he doesnt count:PKristen |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bravo my friend.... I could use such memories today... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm still waiting for one to write for me... this tender memory reassures me the wait is worthwhile. *S* I enjoyed this, Duncan. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh what a lovely memory! Love this Duncan... very tender touch to it. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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