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Helea
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since 1999-08-30
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Canada

0 posted 2002-04-09 11:25 PM


Angel


Confusion clouded my thoughts, thwarted my heart
And scattered my feelings.
I have a great pain
That weighs me down wherever I go
Wherever I stay.

I am afraid of hurting,
Afraid of loving but on I go.
And on my journey I found someone,
Someone amazing
Who is an angel that guards my soul,
That frees my feelings
And let's me live.


I am terrified to hurt,
Terrified to breath and to open my eyes.
I may break this sweet angel's wings
And if this deed is carried out,
I may as well not breath again.
Sweet and gentle,
Your smile is one of peace and perfection.
The softest skin has been given to you.
To you this has been granted this so to
Torture others with this beauty. Beauty only angels may possess.


Everytime my eyes are blessed with your presence,
My heart cries out in happiness and my somber soul shines like the sun.
Everytime, your voice carries beauty and sincerity,
I have to stop myself from telling you how much I really care,
I lie to myself and I lie to you.
But I care for you
And nothing has changed that.


I try to ignore these feelings but I am growing weak as I know there's no way out.
I cannot hide this any longer, Know I love you, know I care...
Never doubt this and everything desired
Will come true... Helea Eunice

© Copyright 2002 Helea - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-09 11:33 PM




YAY!!! This started out sad but became so very lovely and upbeat at the end, sweet friend, may he always be your angel and fill your heart with comfort and wash away your tears and pain with loves trust! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Helea
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 15
Canada
2 posted 2002-04-09 11:52 PM


thanks! I feel so welcomed!!!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-04-10 12:02 PM


Helea~
Welcome to the circle of friendship and poets~
Enjoy your stay, read lots of others and share more with us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
4 posted 2002-04-10 11:51 AM


I have yet to find my angel but I'm glad you found yours I really loved it, at the beginning I really related, honestly, I was beginning to choke up...anyways great read, honestly

Kristen

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2002-04-10 04:19 PM


well, just know that you are not alone!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-04-10 04:49 PM


...Beautiful!!...

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-04-10 04:53 PM


No...you certainly are not alone...and the
feelings you write of are so real...HUGS..


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