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Good Times |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Bad music good music There’s a song somewhere It’s in the underside of me Does it even matter if I’m the only one to see Watered down liquor license to some minor difficulty But I can’t hear it too much swimming in this mind too much of another kind I think the world would stop spinning if every tortured soul would get the one wish that he or she deserved I’d stop trying stop buying another round for my friends The ones that will often listen and leave me in the end [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (04-09-2002 11:06 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Walter Your words were certainly moving and really made me think. I enjoyed reading your words. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
very cool Walt - full of a lot of deep thoughts here.. ahve to admit that the minor rhyming inside added quite a bit to the pace of this piece... peace, Chris |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You're on a Walteroll so I'm looking for the third gem...it's got to be around here somewhere... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Walt, you always twist my mind like a rubberband. Thank goodness you let it unwind at the end  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
they all leave in the end, don't they? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! This is indeed very thought-provoking, sweet friend, may all your friends always have the heart to listen to you and together may you make life filled with happy memories and good times to cherish forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayout, Your talking abaout your fair weather friends Enjoyed the read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think the world would stop spinning if every tortured soul would get the one wish that he or she deserved Not to worry, walt... mine's never gonna happen. *S* Seriously, I really like this poem and its edge... well written! |
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