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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-04-09 10:24 PM


My dogma!
My dogma!
The very rich
are the very
poor
indeed…

that old adage
you can’t take it with you…
no matter how far you run

When I spied you
in that dank
and smoky
bar-cantina-pub-
tavern
the tag it carried
in the corner of the world
you occupied so well

(as France was raped
yet again came the fall)

I shivered for us both.
It was wet,
wet with the evils
of a thousand
strangled men.

I’d found you
Charlie Wales.

But there’s no net in the sea.

The moment lightly
shocked me
as nothing but
exhaustion,
discharged
within the air.

I whispered in
your upturned ear
‘Daddy… Daddy…Dads.’

The identification
tag like an
old murmured tale
of temperance,
moderation,
disavowed as legend
tangled in a dream.

You son of a...
You… You….
Daddy…daddy…dads


...my old pie?
Don’t mince your words.

Maid Mare
I miss her so.
She sent me stamped
from gay Paris
but I became a trunk
with the marks
of well-worn leather.

Sorry Charlie,
daddy dads,
there’s no net in the sea…

no net in the sea…

Where neon gaslights
flicker once
then fade,
in the shadow,
dies a queen.

But boom or crash

I’ll live on,

bull or bear

I’ll go on.

But you! No, not you!
You phantom father!

…there’s no net in the sea

Sorry Charlie (daddy…dads),
conjugal visits
don’t always mean
there’s room at the inn.

I’ve been stamped so many times

Fragile,
Undeliverable,
Return, Postage Unpaid.


Maid Mare
and her mock
compassion,
she had the chance
but ghosts returned
to befall your
haunted path.

And mummy
in her ancient tomb
never cared for me?
That’s what slurred…
that’s what dripped
from Marion’s mouth!

Reclaim your honor
Charlie Wales,
I’ve been following
your footsteps
for a long, long time

my past and present…

dans chaque lit,
un homme m’aura*


You must excuse
my borrowed French.

it’s dark in here
the latch was broken
the little girl
was raped
and now she lives
inside of me

(never defeated)

but brittle chains of
bitter words
bequeath me
one more chance
to call you, Dad

Daddy Daddy!
wake up
wake up
my tired eyes
beseech you!

*In every bed, a man will have me

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (04-09-2002 11:16 PM).]

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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-04-09 10:29 PM


Very interesting.

~sky

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2002-04-10 01:20 PM


i really like this new turn of yours walt - it fits you well.. who'd have thunk?

Chris

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3 posted 2002-04-10 01:46 PM



He's back!...I mean, you're back!  It's been a long time since you've done such a remarkable write...that held one's attention so well...a good weave sir, a very good weave...

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-04-10 02:02 PM


Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
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