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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-04-09 09:39 PM


Sparks

Sparkling jewels fall from my eyes
Crystal tears of wondering sighs
How can I speak of bliss?
The wonder and the joy of this

I’m breathless and amazed by you
Filled with love deep and true
My heart bathed in pure delight
Illumined by your brightest light

Tears of love cascade in me
Revealing such complexity
I’m bound and enthralled by you
Entranced by that thing you do

Take from me the need to be
Replace with your identity
Sear my heart with your desire
Cover me in liquid fire

Speak into the soft of me
Where my reason used to be
Now I know what is true bliss
I’m spellbound by fire's kiss

Marsha


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Suetang
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1 posted 2002-04-09 10:55 PM


Hello Marsha

I can't believe I am the first to comment on this exquisite piece of writing.  The love and romance was so very evident.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this poem shines with loves sparks and joys! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait till I share loves first kiss with the girl of my dreams, sweet friend, may you always embrace the love of your life with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-09 10:59 PM


MarshaLove~
I thought I saw sparks flying~
Utterly illuminating dearie~
You're a sparkie kinda gal~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-04-10 01:37 AM


sis,

wonderful title...very passionate and
now after reading this a second time, i
gotta say this is one of your finer
pieces...i loved it!! your imagery is
always oustanding, but this time you've
outdone yourself! love ya!!

amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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5 posted 2002-04-10 04:48 PM


Less is more Mushy....and this is certainly
MORE....very nicely done lady!!

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6 posted 2002-04-10 06:26 PM


My you are hot today - smokin.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-04-21 08:55 AM


Sue darling girl thank you for rescuing it from the ignominy of zero replies. And I particularly thank you for the exquisite. I’m so pleased you like it

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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8 posted 2002-04-21 08:57 AM


Noah darling boy I can always rely on you to put a smile on my face. Thank you muchly

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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9 posted 2002-04-21 08:58 AM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart, Mmmm there are sparks and then there are SPARKS, isn’t love wonderful? Thank you dearest heart

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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10 posted 2002-04-21 08:58 AM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart YOU never fail to amaze me, you have a beautiful soul and I’m proud to say I have a sis called Amy. Thank you always darling heart

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
  


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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11 posted 2002-04-21 09:04 AM


Magnus darling boy Mmmm less as Keth so often tells me is more, I’m trying to reduce the thought. It takes a bit of doing for someone as verbose as me, but I’m learning. Thank you always for your inspiration

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Marsha
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12 posted 2002-04-21 09:05 AM


Keth darling sister of my heart and holder of crystal orbs of wonder, HEAT darling heart as you know I like writing fire poems. They seem to suit my soul. Thank you darling heart for always, always being there to spark a streak of poetic thought.

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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