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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-04-09 07:10 PM

A Poetic Smile

I wished to write a poetic smile
Something to stay with you awhile
A written lift to bring your grin
A smile to warm your soul within

I wished to write a poetic kiss
A gift to give your soul some bliss
A warming of the heart inside
A kiss to wear with love and pride

I wished to write a poetic hug
To wrap you in its warmth so snug
A simple gift from me to you
A hug to warm your soul all through

I wished to write a poetic song
To keep you when the day is long
Something to raise the spirit high
A song to help your soul to fly

So I wrote this rhyme for you
To lift you when the day is blue
A smile, a kiss, a hug, a song
For you when everything is wrong

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-04-09 07:13 PM

OH MY...Dear Mushy, utterly, utterly
wonderful of you.... Love this one,
certainly does help one smile..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-09 07:15 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet frien, you truly are an angel to us all, you never cease to bringa smile to my face even when I do feel sad and lonely! (kiss on cheek) Whenever you need someone to cheer you up, me and everyone here will always be happy to write you a smile and a warm hug and a kiss on the cheek and a song, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

3 posted 2002-04-09 07:15 PM

Marsha, this is WONDERFUL!!!!!! I love it! You are just too sweet! This is a joy to read!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2002-04-09 08:35 PM

marsha,
sweet sis of my heart...this has me
grinning from ear to ear! such a beautiful
write of your heart...tender and soft
in its meaning...just lovely!

love you!!
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

5 posted 2002-04-09 09:50 PM

Marsha - very sweet words. I wish the same to you.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2002-04-09 10:46 PM

Mushy~ What a beautiful and kind heart you have

Your words and compassion would comfort any weary soul. You brought me smiles and warmth tonite

~Thank you~

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-04-09 10:59 PM

Marsha...this is utterly beautiful mushy girl!
~Poetic Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-04-10 04:51 PM

Marsha - I don't know how I missed this one. I like it as all of yours...

BC

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-04-10 08:06 PM

AND IT WORKED MARSHA, I am feeling great after reading this. Thank you, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-04-10 09:08 PM

Right back to you Marsha!

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

11 posted 2002-04-10 09:44 PM

This one goes into my library for just such an occasion!!! Wonderful write!!!!

[This message has been edited by brianbeaudry (04-11-2002 05:09 PM).]

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

12 posted 2002-04-10 09:47 PM

Marsha, this is just beautiful! It surely gave my heart a lift tonight. Thank you!
Great write

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

13 posted 2002-04-10 09:59 PM

No one can bring a smile better than you, mushy one

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