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Sunset (acrostic)
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Sunset (acrostic) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Shaded in glowing hues Under twilight skies Near the edges of dusk Slipping into the dark Evening begins it's stay Touched by Gods hand ~Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....~(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-09-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous imagery always shines across these pages! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this radiates with sunlight! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah, thanks. Beautiful sunsets have that effect on me....lol....thanks. Hugs. Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-09-2002 07:14 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love how you did this...and the words perfectly matched the scene you painted! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is cool, my favorite thing is a sunset over the Pacific Ocean. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So lovely, especially the last line! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna, this is sooo beautiful! Very lovely acrostic! ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So very beautiful, Donna.... Its amazing...the power that a sunset can have on our creativity...  creative hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ Loving this!!   Lauren~ Step through the |
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