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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-04-09 05:46 PM


My pen becomes my mouthpiece
As I relay my thoughts to you
My words coming from my heart
For you my audience to view

You may not always agree with
All the things I have to say
My words come from deep within
Inside my soul is where they lay

My words may speak of hope
Or they may be filled with grief
The things I write of are many
As I relay my loves and beliefs

As most of you are aware
It is about my father I often write
He was such a very big part of me
And I still follow his guiding light

My words are far from perfect
But they are a reflection of what I see
And each time I reveal my thoughts
I expose yet another picture of me

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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1 posted 2002-04-09 05:58 PM



Never quit writing of your father
too many went without
we will borrow yours
happily...

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2 posted 2002-04-09 06:10 PM


You pen a most perfect picture of yourself.
A painting which will grace the walls of
PiP forever....Don't ever stop.

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3 posted 2002-04-09 06:30 PM




(big hugggssssss) An you always say the most beautiful honest and heartfelt words about yourself and the love in your heart, sweet friend! God Bless You, you are a true delight to us all and I know your father will always love you and be so proud of you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-04-09 06:44 PM


You have such a great way with words. I am always in awe of the things you write and look forward to each and every one of your poems. This was so moving. Your dad was such a positive influence on your life. He is with you always. Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2002-04-09 10:48 PM


Your words and your kindness continually move me. I believe my words wouldn't have much meaning if it weren't for the inspiration I receive from all the other writers who remain the backbone of my poetry.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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Kansas USA
6 posted 2002-04-09 11:45 PM


There are a lot of facets to our friend, Sue.  Thank you for yet another picture.  I try not to miss any of your poems--so much caring, generosity, honesty and talent.  It's wonderful getting to know our multi-faceted friend through her amazingly insightful poems.  Send more pictures (poems) please.

Shenachie

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7 posted 2002-04-09 11:59 PM


Sue~

This moved me with words I can not speak right now....I will keep this in my Library....for another read...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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8 posted 2002-04-10 01:37 PM


Sue:  It is such a compliment to those of us who follow your poems, to have you reveal a bit more of who you are as a person. I always enjoy what you write. My father too, was the mainstay of my life and though he has been gone many years now, I think about him all the time and remember his teachings.

Betty Lou Hebert

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displaced
9 posted 2002-04-10 04:14 PM


that's what i think too
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