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Questions of Love |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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What do you know about leaving me weak What makes your touch so different, unique Why am I chosen for your affection And why choose me for your soul confession How is it you know secrets inside my heart How do you understand that hidden part When was it, that we became so much more When was it, that you gained my sweet adore Who are you, to know how I need to feel Who are you that made this dream for me, real Where then was it written, if not in stone Where else could you find, words before unknown Were you aware of my need for your touch Were you aware, that I’d love you so much ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) These are all such powerful questions about love, sweet friend, and I know with all my heart they shall be answered when you hold your loves hand forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well questioned SEA. How is it these things are possible? I can only answer for me: to know and understand my beloved is to know and understand myself, for she completes me. The rest is easy. INclan |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Jon, you LUCKY fella! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful!!... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
perhaps with hands in the sand and with fingers there printed the words to recognize in your dreams did the sandman watch lovely poem SEA |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
creativity flows from one to another in light of lovesong... well done, SEA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done Sue, yep, it surely is.... Love this one.. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, beautiful poem...lots of meaningful heartfelt questions, sometimes it's amazing to find someone who just seems to know what we need, and when we need it ...i guess it just goes to show that sometimes what happens in our lives is bigger than both you and I...great write. take care. loves ya. amy "you can't stop |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much, Interloper, I'm the lucky one and DS, the sandman is the one rockin my dreams, always lolthank you |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very lucky man, Susan. me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Brilliant. Questions we all at one point ask when we're in love. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I find that questions of love are usually followed by answers of love. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is priceless !  'How is it you know secrets inside my heart How do you understand that hidden part When was it, that we became so much more When was it, that you gained my sweet adore' Just priceless ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Sea~ It's been a pleasure to watch your writing flourish... you are tuning in to that inner voice that helps each of us to discover what is already there. *hugs* Indigo |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Lovely words I enjoyed very much regards, Olias. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
good questions SEA! enjoyed my reading. Eliza Simmons |
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newmanwalking69 Junior Member
since 2002-04-10
Posts 10 |
woderful poem, i love to see and read love poems and that was a very deep poem, please if you have a chance come see mine thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another wonderful one indeed Susan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May all your questions beome silky clear...James |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Always the romantic, SEA.. Nicely done.. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, your romantic poems always have such a sweet quality to them. I really loved this. Into the library for sure. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan Very sweet and sincerly expressed...love just is, and when it's good, it's very very good! |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
A veritable sonet of questions dear friend and a beautiful sonet at that |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sea, just a BEAUTIFUL write so full of emotion. I really love this! Great work as always! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Were these rhetorical or did you expect me to give you the answers?  [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-11-2002 02:26 AM).] |
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