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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-09 12:45 PM



Devilin' Disguise

You hide behind, torment of kind
disclose not much of self, yet touch
in words of rhyme, not lost in time
concealed you be, the "I" to me.

Your devilin' disguise, belies
The poetry of praise in thee.


M

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1 posted 2002-04-09 12:50 PM


"disclose not much of self, yet touch
in words of rhyme, not lost in time"

love the rhyme of this

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-04-09 12:57 PM


Hi SEA..I am teasin'  Interloper..I think he is a bit of a devil (in disguise of course)

*s

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3 posted 2002-04-09 01:16 PM


I am devilish
with horns and a pointy tail
scratching my saddle

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-04-09 01:25 PM


Oh..and I meant you torment    in   kind... kind words...*s

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5 posted 2002-04-09 06:46 PM


nakdthoughts - I know of this one...

BC

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6 posted 2002-04-09 07:04 PM




(giggles over Interloper's comment) This is so very true, sweet friend, I think we can all relate to this kind of praise sometimes, sweet friend, this is so very true! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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