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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Fluttering Fingertips ~*Marge Tindal*~  Fluttering fingertips tracing love across bare, silken skin Moving so expertly bringing ecstasy deeply from within ~ Sweet caress of tenderness plays the song of me Strum of humming fingertips slip across my melody ~ Just once more with feeling play my favorite melody Lover's overture softly sighing crescendo of me ~*~ *For you, Bill ... Baby, you knoooow what I like~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the pic is gorgeous and love the feel of this  very nice Marge  |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ Touch can speak volumes. Sensuously written....and what a perfect picture! Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmmmmm, and here I am trying so VERY hard to be rated G I love it! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is sooooooo sensuous and melodic, I really love this. Touch is so essential in any relationship whether that be spiritual or physical. This is utterly utterly perfect writing, you surely are an excellent writer. Truly wonderful poem, the artwork is utterly perfect and really compliments the poetry perfectly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge,  loved it. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful Marge, wonderful write, and cute too!!  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-09-2002 06:58 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just lovely, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank you gal ... I would have bet the farm you'd like it~  SmittenKitten~ Glad I was able to capture that sensuous mood~  InterLoper~ LOL ... any response worth it's salt would get me thrown into adult .... and I've not been there .... YET ! (but it IS Tuesday in the land of the limitations !) Tee-Hee~ MarshaLove~ Yah ... spiritual is certainly what I had in mind~ LOL ... you're cracking me up here !!!! Seymour~ *hugs* to you too, sweetie~ GentleSpirit~ Thank you .... it was just one of those pieces that flowed with ease~ SmartChickie~ Thank you sugar~ *Bill .... I love you foreverly~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The words, the picture...it all comes together so beautifully, Marge... This must be butterfly week!  ~more butterfly hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Very romantic and lovely. Thanks for sharing! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ Thank you ... I think EVERY week is 'flutterby' week~ BettyLou~ Thank you so much~ **One of our Passions members, Sandy, who runs A Sandbox Greetings has placed this on her site, along with some others I've written. Drop by and check her out~ Awesome card site~ http://asandboxgreeting.com/flutteringft.html *HUGS* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Just once more with feeling play my favorite melody Enjoyed the soft touch in this Marge~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge He's gotta love this one. Much love! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ Oh, thank you for the sweet reply~ MartieSis~ Oh .... he does .... he does~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Very nice indeed, Marge. I'm sure Bill gets the idea. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ I thought I had answerd this one....its ever so soft, and tender.... I love this....I also saved the picture but will delete it if you want me too....great write... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-12-2002 07:50 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Ahhhhh, Bill IS the idea~ Thanks gal~ GreenEyes~ Oh hon ... I'd love knowing you grabbed the graphic ... I found it surfing some time back and there was no artist credit on it ... so enjoy, dear~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
WOW.....WOOOOOOOOOOOOW Talk about giving a fella goose bumps and like Forest Gump that is all I have to say about that....or it might get edited...I am going to take a cold shower Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...Just EXQUISITE WORK!!! So powerful in the need portrayed; yet so tender in its caress of love. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dan~ Ooooohhh, I DO know about those goosie-bumps~ I get 'em every time he does his magic finger-fluttering~ IvyRose~ You picked up the subtle nuances perfectly~ Thanks to both of you for the kind replies~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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