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I Miss You (Here I Go Again)
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I Miss You (Here I Go Again) |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi Folks, I listen to one of my favorite artist(Darren Hayes) while writing this, and it may have effected my writing, just a tiny bit. I think the title say something about that. Well, please critique, thanks!! Best Wishes, Brian. "I miss you (Here I go again)" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: And here I go again I don't remember being chain Without you I'm always Tweenty minutes late. And here I go again Because in you I'm always stained And I can feel the pain Running through my vains... L1: Whether I like it or not When I'm fast asleep at night You're in my every thought Guess I didn't leave you behind... C: 'Cause then I wouldn't miss you so much I wouldn't long for your every touch Wouldn't long for the taste of your kiss There's nothing more to say then I miss I didn't mean to, but I miss you... No, no, no, no, I miss you, I miss you, beautiful. V2: And here I go again 'Cause I'm slowly going insane Lost me when I lost you Never felt so blue. And here I go again My faith has crashed like a plane I couldn't stop the pain Hit me like a train... L2: So give me a reason why You're memories haunting me Tell me is it a sign That I miss you so tirrebly L1: Whether I like it or not When I'm fast asleep at night You're in my every thought Guess I didn't leave you behind... C: 'Cause then I wouldn't miss you so much I wouldn't long for your every touch Wouldn't long for the taste of your kiss There's nothing more to say then I miss I didn't mean to, but I miss you... No, no, no, no, I miss you, I miss you, beautiful. B: When you leave a room. I wanna follow you. But trip over my shoelase. Please re-open the case. 'Cause I know I can win. This time, let me in. C: 'Cause then I wouldn't miss you so much I wouldn't long for your every touch Wouldn't long for the taste of your kiss There's nothing more to say then I miss I didn't mean to, but I miss you... No, no, no, no, I miss you, I miss you, beautiful. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very good song! Everyone can relate to missing someone and wanting a second try |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Whether I like it or not When I'm fast asleep at night You're in my every thought Guess I didn't leave you behind..." yes... I could hear this  and I like it very much |
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