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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-04-09 10:45 AM


~Dreamers Dance~

Dreamers dance in rainbow light
Through the tangles of the night
Spin in pirouetted grace
Watched by night’s impassive face

Twirl and dip in perfect time
No mistakes your dance divine
Bend in liquid grace of charm
Arch of body curve of arm

Arabesque in lacy gown
Leaping high floating down
Like a feather blown in air
Drifting slowly without care

Dreamers dance with partners bold
While the night grows slowly old
Soon the sun comes once more
Then the dancers leave the floor

Marsha





To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-09-2002 07:05 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-04-09 10:50 AM


a dreamers dance...love it. I love to dance but today, I find it hard to find a man who enjoys it too.

hugss
M


reminds me of shadow dancing...hmmm...inspiring me

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Aimster
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2 posted 2002-04-09 11:15 AM


sis,


this was so elegant and beautiful...
such grace and softness come from this
and "dance" upon the page...just wonderful
work...lovely images. you make me smile.
love you!

amy

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the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-04-09 11:32 AM


Ah! I always enjoy dancing to the break of dawn! Sure beats sleep. And Mushy, darling girl of my heart you know how I adore your heavenly gait.

((Marsha))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-04-09 11:37 AM


Marsha,
Dancing till dawn would be a little difficult for me, but with you I would do it.
Excellent write.

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5 posted 2002-04-09 11:40 AM


"Arabesque in lacy gown
Leaping high floating down
Like a feather blown in air
Drifting slowly without care"

this is lovely Marsha. Floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-04-09 01:16 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your wondefful words always leap up in grace like a ballet performance, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) May all your dreams leap to destiny, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-04-09 01:19 PM


So, sonambulating Sambas?

SmittenKitten
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8 posted 2002-04-09 02:50 PM



Ohhhh....beautiful!  Perfect rhyme and flow.  Your words dance slowly across the page exactly as you have described.

hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Effigy
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9 posted 2002-04-09 02:55 PM


great read

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-04-09 06:42 PM


Marsha - I almost missed this one. I'd love to dance the night away, enter into dreamland, holding someone close. Yes, I would love to dance...

BC

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11 posted 2002-04-09 06:47 PM


Nicely penned Marsha...enjoyed very much the tip toe of your graceful words..hugss

                 ~Victoria

Suetang
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12 posted 2002-04-09 10:51 PM


Hello Marsha

Such stunning images were found in your beautiful words.  This was lovely.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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