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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2002-04-09 09:34 AM


Life
like a river
carrying us in
measured thoughts
where to, we know not

flowing,
travelling
like a journey to
a destination, unknown
maybe even predestined

and sometimes in its flow
and amongst currents,
it gets stuck for a
long moment
or two

  
                         s
                     p
       i r c           i
first c       l, then     r
        g n i            a
                       l
                          l
                             i
                          n
                       g

around
a rock or two

only to rejoin the stream
and continue the
expedition of
Life

      



[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (04-09-2002 09:41 AM).]

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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-04-09 09:58 AM


Very Creative Sudhir. I love the poem and the uniqueness of the presentation. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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2 posted 2002-04-09 09:59 AM


Fantastic Sudhir!  
Love the presentation!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-04-09 01:32 PM




(smiles) WOW!!! I too love the way you present your work too, sweet friend, this one flows just like the gentle cradling of  a river! (big hugggsssss) May your river carry you to clear sailing of love and serenity sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-09 01:33 PM


Very crafty my friend.

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5 posted 2002-04-09 03:31 PM


ah yes my friend. . . the "flow" of this is excellent. . . the visual is most appreciated. . .

well done. . .

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Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2002-04-10 02:38 AM


Thank you all my friends, so very much...

Regards,
Sudhir

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7 posted 2002-04-10 01:17 PM


heh - you do like to play with the images - interesting Sudhir.

Chris

Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2002-04-10 05:03 PM


thanks for coming by and for the "interesting"... Chris

regards,
sudhir

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9 posted 2002-05-01 01:15 AM


Sudhir, what a gem I find here...
Fantastic writing PoetFriend...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

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10 posted 2002-05-01 05:03 AM


Very creative, Sudhir, and very true. As always I enjoy what you have to say.

Dee

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Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2002-05-21 09:32 AM


Thank you very much, coco and Dee...

regards,
Sudhir

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12 posted 2002-05-21 04:10 PM


Definitely a poem for these PIP times.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2002-06-19 05:54 AM


thanks you very much.

Regards,
Sudhir

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