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Scots Gent
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In a Lover's Heart

0 posted 2002-04-09 08:50 AM


Will the sun e'er shine
On this life o'mine
When the clouds do finally part
Will the sunshine finally start
Or will it be but a tease
Bringin' me to m'knees
Droppin' down rain on me
'Stead o'rays of sun like thee

Life is too short, supersize it - SG

© Copyright 2002 Stephen Colquhoun - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-04-09 09:01 AM



Yes!




Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-04-09 09:06 AM


...Beautiful!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-04-09 01:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the sunshine always shine through the clods after every storm and light your heart with joy! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Scots Gent
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In a Lover's Heart
4 posted 2002-04-09 01:28 PM


Thankee both, you're too kind - SG

Life is too short, supersize it - SG

Scots Gent
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In a Lover's Heart
5 posted 2002-04-09 01:30 PM


an' you too m'good friend Noah - SG
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-04-09 01:32 PM


It looks like Sunshine has already parted the clouds

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
7 posted 2002-04-09 02:45 PM



Your sunshine will come...and maybe it will bring a rainbow with it!

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Zinsser
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8 posted 2002-04-09 05:23 PM


nice work...  
Connie

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9 posted 2002-04-09 06:39 PM


welcome to passion enjoy your read
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