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Thank You, Young Poet
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Thank You, Young Poet |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Thank You, Young Poet You placed your words like diamond stars in the twilight sky, brilliant and glittering sequins of delight then strung them into phrases like a long Mardi Gras necklace they floated down and landed around my desires wrapping me in aesthetic pleasures and there I stood and still remain captivated and captive, bound by your thougths so brilliantly rendered The meaning was kown but not yet conceived by my heart and so I am entraced by the wonder of your verse and shall never look at the night sky in the same way, for you have transformed it into poetry. Thank you, young poet for your diamond necklace is now wrapped around my soul and will always shine through the darkness of my eyes and will guide me to the gates of heaven Elizabeth Santos |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Lovely and only as you can write. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Thank you, young poet Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is so very beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of ove never fail to bring a smile to my face! (kiss on cheek) May you always share a lifetime of happiness with loves heaven close to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, Noah, You always brighten my day Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely gift of gem, this poetry, and your young poet! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Thank you, young poet for your diamond necklace is now wrapped around my soul and will always shine through the darkness of my eyes and will guide me to the gates of heaven" Tears Liz, this brought tears. It is so very touching. floria Floria |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've missed seeing your name... and this is why. *S* This is beautiful, Elizabeth... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . thank you, Young Poet for time is a string of ages that always begins with youth and never ends. . . you will always be one of my biggest inspirations. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you, young poet for your diamond necklace is now wrapped around my soul and will always shine through the darkness of my eyes and will guide me to the gates of heaven ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Amazing write Elizabeth! Enjoyed reading you again. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Elizabeth~ Beautifully and gracefully written. Your words glisten with sincerity. ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, this is so wonderfully expressed! I thank you for being a poet  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, Thank you dear, you never miss a poem Floria, I appreciate the depth to which you read. Your poetry is very heartfelt and inspiring. Thank you suthern, wish we cold see you, some day, perhaps, Thank you for your kind remarks sven, It is you, my dear, who have inspired many with many memorable poems. Thank you Nancy, Glad you liked the peom. Thank you so very much Krista, I miss this place, wish I could drop in more often, but time does not allow Melissa, AW, how sweet, Thank you. Liz |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey, young poet - Thank YOU... for your wondrous words..  How's mysterias tricks??? It sure is quiet around here...  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Elizabeth ... your words wrapped themselves around my soul a long time ago my friend ... this is delightful, in both flow and sentiment. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz - Thank YOU, too, young poet. You write so consistenly well. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful,Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, she's cleaning my kitchen and cooking my dinner, while I am lounging by the computer. She's a wonserful friend, I'm so glad she's here! Thanks, dear for your comment |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kit, Soon I will meet my twin who also wraps strings of stars around my soul. Thank you LngJhn, Thank you, dear friend, for your words. Hope you can join the Cape Cod Crew. Lots of hugs nakedthoughts, THank you so much Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When you come back you do it in STYLE Beautifully done Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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