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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-09 07:45 AM



The Attraction of You


Sometimes, the nearness of you is enough
to empty my mind of all, but memories shared.
How powerful, the attraction of you.

Sometimes I wish to reach out to you
by voice, by words, hoping to not be misunderstood.
How hard it is, to be in control.

Sometimes I lose that self-control
finding myself there, in dreams, by your side, unnoticed.
How strong, your attraction is.

And other times, I follow those dreams
to be with you, if only for a moment's touch.
How I love, what attracts me to you.

*Thinking of you today....
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-04-09 08:06 AM


Maureen,
Missed that one, a lovely write.

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-04-09 08:20 AM


Maureen darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful
Do you have to really write this well darling girl? Hmmm? Is it fair to be such a good writer okay I forgive you, since you so generously share your beauty with PIP's.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-04-09 10:39 AM


M's  This is a lovely image
enjoyed you here

J. K. Mitchell
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4 posted 2002-04-09 10:55 AM


This is beautiful

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Aimster
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5 posted 2002-04-09 11:19 AM


M,

this is beautiful! attraction sure can
be a very powerful thing, especially when
it's not just physical...this was lovely
hon. wonderful write!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-04-09 11:36 AM


Maureen this is very beautiful, as you are.

((Newell))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

strbbux
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7 posted 2002-04-09 11:53 AM


So lovely Maureen. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-04-09 07:56 PM




(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, may you and your love forever be embraced together in harmony and feel attracted spiritually to his heart always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sensitive and touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2002-04-10 09:54 AM


Sy, glad you caught it this go round *s

Marsha..you always make me feel writing is worthwhile
hugs
M


D...glad you got a glimpse of the me you enjoy  *s

J. K. Mitchell ..thank you very  much.

Amy ..attraction as in "emotional" is the  greatest...evenmore so than physical.
Thank you
M

((Newell))... you are too kind .but thanks
M

Floria..nice to see you back, thank you for reading.

Noah...hey you...always embracing with kind words and thoughts..
thank you
M

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
10 posted 2002-04-11 08:33 PM


And other times, I follow those dreams
to be with you, if only for a moment's touch.
How I love, what attracts me to you.

You've such tender thoughts Maureen!
This was just beautiful!!!

ecrivan
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my own state
11 posted 2002-04-11 08:57 PM


powers of attraction, though very strong
has their downside...sounds like this might be implied here..nice one


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-11-2002 08:58 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-04-11 09:20 PM


Sometimes I lose that self-control
finding myself there, in dreams, by your side, unnoticed.
How strong, your attraction is.

I know this feeling, Maureen...but you describe it so very beautifully
~lots of hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
13 posted 2002-04-16 03:37 AM


Lori, sorry I keep missing you, but staying up late had become hard for me at times *s... that 3 hour difference is a tough one.
hugss
M

Martin, attraction is wonderful at times, hard to demagnitize sometimes, but then again maybe I am not ready for that...yet *s thanks.


Lyra, Happy Birthday and many hugs in return. I hope your treatments are going well..
M



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