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Lavender Kisses
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Lavender Kisses |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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I have changed some of this. I have been going through some of my work and editing but this is one of my favorites because it is a true story. Lavender Kisses With the sun at my side with spring almost here I woke with a moment to be a memory to last For this morning had a tenderness like I rarely view I just sat hoping that moment would surely pass... For a great length of time I never took my eyes off of her I just stared at her profile while tears fell within Trying desperately to hold back what seems I spend a lifetime doing Found me dreading another good-bye again... With pearls and a dress and way too beautiful for the world Found her physical self to feel anything but small Though her appearance was of a princess but with her fake smile attached I knew inside she wasn't feeling any beauty at all... Her face all made up like a new identity for us all to see Even trying to convince herself she was every bit of changed It broke my heart even more when she looked into my eyes There was this girl make believing she couldn't feel the rain... A little blue on the eyelids much of the color of the sky I thought for a moment if only I could make it feel like a spring day Her cheeks the color of roses when the sun shines upon them Still here I was begging for morning to take the pain away... There was her hair of brown with blonde that danced through it all I quickly thought of how much of me remains fromwhen I was young With a little purple placed upon her tiny little lips I knew that this moment, for her, truly wasn't fun... When she noticed I hadn't stopped looking at her beautiful face She asked just what is it you are looking to see? She placed her arms around me and sighed I love you, Mommy And, then stretched to place the lavender kisses upon my cheek... Sauni Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Saunni, So how does bein' a mom get better than that? Just wonderful. She is so lucky to have you. I'm sure you feel so lucky to have her. I liked this a bunch. Good job.  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Larry C, thank you reading this. Oh,yes, I am lucky to have her...and I try to be the best mother I can be, My children are my life. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Saunni...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sauni, you are a wonderful mother and I know both of your adoreable children love you to pieces. They are so very lucky to have Angel you for a mum. Thank you for sharing with us this very, very beautiful poem. God bless you, mother. ((Sauni)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-09-2002 08:04 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always bring a sparkle to all our hearts, I just know she will always love you for you are a true angel to so many and your words always shine with such angelic light! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Saunni~ OMG you had tears falling down my cheeks with this...beautiful writing from your pen of gold...you write of your heart so wonderfully, every image you create i can see in my mind. thank you for this little piece of heaven this afternoon! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ When our little girls play dress-up ... they are so adorable~ You captured a moment to keep forever~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
bump  "you can't stop |
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