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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-04-08 11:24 PM



Heart-Blown Memories

~*Marge Tindal*~

Soft across a memory
you blow so gently
through my mind
Bursting into
bubbles of
tenderest
recall

The slightest thought of you
blows my mind completely away
to another time, another place
You blew a kiss into the wind
to see how far it would go
Who would have thought
it would circle back
catching me in a
bubbling of
desire
~*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Greeneyes
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1 posted 2002-04-08 11:31 PM


Marge~

Perfect! very lovely...

Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-08-2002 11:32 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-04-08 11:31 PM


You blew a kiss into the wind
to see how far it would go

Oh Yes!!
I love the images this brought to mind.
Beautifully done Marge~

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2002-04-08 11:35 PM



Marge~ How I've missed your tender words...beautiful as always sweet lady.

hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-04-08 11:48 PM


GreenEyes~
Thank you, sweetie~

BluesSerenade~
Awwww, thanks~

SmittenKitten~
Speaking of MISSED ...
you have been greatly, by ME~
It's so good to see you.
Thank you for the read and reply~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

HopeS
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5 posted 2002-04-09 12:38 PM


Soft and dreamy
floating the breeze
beautiful thoughts Marge
Hope

Saunni
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6 posted 2002-04-09 04:04 AM


Marge, just complete beauty here and such beautiful thoughts that will linger with me a long time. I love this. Oh, and the pic is awesome. You always find the coolest pictures.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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7 posted 2002-04-09 05:31 AM


I want some...James
Marsha
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8 posted 2002-04-09 06:43 AM


Margie darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. These bubbles simply flow with such wondrous delight. I love your creativity, you are incredibly talented, and you share the fruits of your delight with us so brilliantly. PIP’s is indeed blessed by your presence/

YOU do know I love this absolutely beautiful bubble of love don’t you? Yes of course you do


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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9 posted 2002-04-09 06:53 AM



Quite likely one bubble would find another...this is sweet Marge!  Thank you for shaing!

Dee
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10 posted 2002-04-09 07:20 AM


Marge, this is so sweet and lovely. I truely enjoyed it.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2002-04-09 08:27 AM


Sweet, soft, lovely, YOU
Liz

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2002-04-09 09:36 AM


Hope~
Thank you ... that's exactly how it felt~

Saunni~
I appreciate knowing yu enjoyed it my friend~

JamesMichael~

Marsha~
Awww, you make a smile that lasts a long time~
Thank you dear lady~

SolielNoir~
Oh .. a neat perception ... thank you~

Dee~
Thanks dear lady~

LizzieLady~
You left me a soft smile ... thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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13 posted 2002-04-09 11:37 AM


Delightful Marge. Floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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14 posted 2002-04-09 11:47 AM


Oh, this is so sweet and happy. (Like a bubble that never pops)
Sandra

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15 posted 2002-04-09 08:47 PM


I like the way you did this, Marge. Just beautiful.
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-04-09 09:13 PM


Floria~
Thanks hon~

CatalinaMoon~
I appreciate that~

SmartChickie~
Thank you ... I just love the artistic touch~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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17 posted 2002-04-09 11:28 PM


Marge:  Showing great imagination and flair, as usual!  Charming poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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18 posted 2002-04-10 04:49 PM


YOU...yes YOU...really are good at this,  
surely you know that!

Sudhir Iyer
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19 posted 2002-04-10 04:57 PM



Martie
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20 posted 2002-04-10 05:53 PM


"Who would have thought
it would circle back
catching me in a
bubbling of
desire"

I would have!

Nan
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21 posted 2002-04-10 08:10 PM


Very nice - I truly enjoyed, m'friend..

Marge Tindal
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It's such a great day to be a poet ... thanks to each of you for your kind replies~
*HUGS* n' other fancy *STUFF*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

angeliceyes48198
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23 posted 2002-05-31 09:20 PM


I can relate to this poem all too well!
               angeliceyes48198

ethome
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24 posted 2002-05-31 10:02 PM


Beautiful Marge......I blow you a kiss of praise for your thoughts!!
ThUnDeRkYsS
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25 posted 2002-05-31 10:27 PM


Marge, this is wonderful... I love the circling around in the end   I blew a kiss once to see what would happen and the wind got it stuck in a tree, so now its waiting for someone who can fly
Liked this lots

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.


[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (05-31-2002 10:28 PM).]

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