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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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"The work of the tiller bears fruit the heist of the thief bears loot," there's the couple that takes an oath of honour and the sitcom starring the late Carroll O'Connor. The way you make your bed is how you sleep when in the sack, remember: get up for a leak; young kids decide to peep in on parents in bed you decide on marital life once you are wed. Drifted away to lands of choices ready made feared Stalin Europe with its red brigades; Are the Gulags gone, revamped with free trade. is peace from a cake mix, add water, ready made? "My son, still hopeful of the world of tomorrow? You married, raised kids, they chose to borrow;" with loans and mortagages they soon spread far and wide their debts began to stifle, poor credibility would ride. Hard work bears fruit of different kinds some exotic picks have the thickest rind, "The way you make your bed is how you sleep now that said, get to bed, not a peep!" [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-08-2002 10:00 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) It is indeed a typical situation of life, and all the choices we make determine what our lifes will lead to every step of the way, and the effects of each one are inevitable! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello and Greetings... "Made your bed, now lay in it"... I truly appreciate your good humor and excellent poetry. ThisDiamond |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
choices are everywhere, sometimes I wish I'd choose things more wisely! Nice write my friend enjoyed as usual |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
"The way you make your bed is how you sleep That line is worth repeating a few more times. You've got me thinking too hard ....again. And that's a good thing...I liked this. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
when in the sack, remember: get up for a leak; LOL....wise advice, indeed! Great poem, Martin.  ~laughing hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
never take life too seriously ) |
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