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Sometime Love Must Die
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Sometime Love Must Die |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I thought about my feelings- Then I tried to sort them out. To put my thoughts in order... Find out what life's all about. Was what we, lightly, once called love- A real and lasting thing? Or was it merely passion? A flighty, passing fling? Then I recalled the tear drops- The heartache and the loss, When at last I realized- The line I must not cross... I'm sorry that I hurt us- I fully take the blame... There was a time or two I woke... Up. Calling out your name. I'm glad that we're still speaking- Though we can feel the strain- We keep our conversation light, To keep from causing pain... It's best to let the old wounds heal- Let sleeping problems lie... But still it is a tragedy- That sometime love must die. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As many times as I read this (6) I found another gem here. Well expressed from the heart poet. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for this one, i love the sad ones. and it's very true...sometimes love does die. Oh well, remember and go on. good piece! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, love can indeed die but there will always be one true love that will always live on and I know you will find it with a golden heart like yours! (sigh) This is wonderfully sensitive, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
yes, love dies at some point, but I am glad to see you moving on and learning from the experience my friend. well done, very well done! |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
I can relate to this, it is beautiful that you have been touched with love but to hide what you feel is the worst thing, I am going through this not being able to say how you feel just incase you open old wounds. Keep the memory of the love you shared. Beautiful poem. God Bless, Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You captured my thoughts and feelings so well. I love this. |
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newmanwalking69 Junior Member
since 2002-04-10
Posts 10 |
i know exactly how you feel about love, love does die but can grow once again, please come take a look at my new poem and maybe you will see what i'm talking to about |
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