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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-04-08 08:29 PM




Take a look
at this
I write
on the palm of my hands
Take a peek at my life
feel it
dream my dreams
love like me
hate like me
Here
I give you this
silent memories
passion and desires
Then answer me
if you care
let me know
what you think
or perhaps be inspired
and write like me
on the palm of your hands
what you can't say

[This message has been edited by walker (04-08-2002 08:31 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-04-08 09:16 PM


And share these words with every handshake and every touch... Fantastic. ThisDiamond
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
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2 posted 2002-04-08 09:37 PM




(smiles) Hands can indeed say so much in loves language, sweet friend, may you always dance with your love and hold hands together in trust and faith forever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-04-09 12:01 PM


Hey walker...this is quite different from your usual write.  I like it alot!  Actually, I've jotted down words, lines on my hands before, to remind me until i could get to pen and paper.  Very cool poem, walker!
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