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In the moment of loving you
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In the moment of loving you |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Deserted by you and stranded in his arms I drown peacefully in the agony of desire Soothe only by his passion but disrupted by memories of you Happiness lost and found driven only by the pain of loving you I survive and make new memories of loving someone besides you But I torment myself with each kiss that taste like you And a tear erases my fears as I fall deeply into lust And I lose myself in fragments of love stuck forever in the moment of loving you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is sooooooo wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, your wonderful words always shine with passion and warmth! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
walker - sad, beautiful, telling, a great write... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Walker...excellent...such are the feelings when we still remember that other person... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it is so wierd in the beginning...when you are so much in remembrance of a former lover and you know that you must let go...you almost seem out of place...when actually you are probably right where you belong....James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The dichotomy of this is remarkable and saddening, walker. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow, this is a wonderful write. We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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