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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2002-04-08 05:20 PM


Light raindrops pitter-pattering,
a squirrel chitter-chattering,
my thoughts go skitter-skattering,
what does it matter, anyway.

Slight breezes wheezing through the trees,
can't help but sigh contentedly,
one moment of such harmony,
is worth a thousand yesterdays.

Where focus is prerequisite,
to get my butt back out of debt,
each second here holds no regrets,
save that I might not longer stay.

Let not the sky embrace the moon,
infinity, would be too soon,
"There's more to nothing." quoth the loon.
"Do not make me forsake this, nay!"

For butterflies are fluttering,
in spite of all my muttering,
Repeat( in case was stuttering )
"Do not make me forsake this, nay!"


© Copyright 2002 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-08 08:08 PM


Hi Dr Moose. This is very cool. Enjoyed.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-04-08 09:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this poem twitters with such melody, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-04-09 05:15 PM


I love this write  : )
very well done  
Connie

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4 posted 2002-04-09 05:17 PM


a fun and creative read dr. enjoyed

             ~Victoria

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5 posted 2002-04-09 05:21 PM



Moose~I love the flow of this   It bounces through my mind.
Smiling,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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