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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-04-08 03:57 PM


Poet Write Me

===dip===
====your====
=====pen=====
=====into=====
=====the=====
=====ink=====
=====of=====
=====my=====
=====soul=====
=====write=====
====the====
===words===
==that==
=make=
=me=
whole
~~~~~~ ###~~~~~~
====== ###======
Write me in shades of blue
Fill me with thought of you
Dip your quill into soul’s ink
Inscribe words of poet think
Painted hues of rainbow coloured sigh
Written words that take me flying high
Write me poet with words of bliss
Write me always just like this


Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-08 04:00 PM


How artful

Will this suffice?

give in to this bliss
please take my heart as your prize
it was always yours

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-08 04:11 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful quill never ceases to amaze me and grace these pages with true poetic beauty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-08 04:16 PM


Marsha a beautiful shape poem!
You are sooo very clever!
~Hugs~

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4 posted 2002-04-08 04:32 PM



What is this?  Taking the challenge I offer to your daughter and coming around [and quite well] with the reply...

Passions is doubly blessed by the two of you....

Magicmystery
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5 posted 2002-04-08 04:56 PM


I am speachless... but I have some ink.... LOL

I just can't wait to see your daugher's now... This one was splendid...

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Magicmystery
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6 posted 2002-04-08 05:06 PM


sorry... forgot to put this one in my library.... gave you a little bump there....

Sherry

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7 posted 2002-04-08 05:48 PM


I knew Mom would have to get her two sense
(pun) in two....(pun again)

Nicely done Mushy!

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8 posted 2002-04-08 05:55 PM


Marsha how uniquely lovely. I wish I had your imagination. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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9 posted 2002-04-08 06:47 PM


Marsha, darling girl, wow are you fantastic. And so is your daughter. I am in awe of you both. And it sure is a lot of fun to watch the two of you doubly delight us.

Keep the blue passions fire going, sweet angel of honey. We all love you (and Krissy) and love to see your wonderful works of crativity. I love this, especially.

((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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10 posted 2002-04-08 06:54 PM


OhMarshaLove~
Such talent bounding across the screen in shades of ink so lovely~
You've got it gal ~
It's soooooooooo FUN to see the creativity flowing~
Big smiles from this gal~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2002-04-08 07:36 PM


Marsha this is just beautiful, I love shape poems and yours is awsome.

Titia

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Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2002-04-08 08:24 PM


Marsha - love the shape poem, did you learn this from Krissy....

BC

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13 posted 2002-04-08 09:32 PM


Quite adorable, Marsha....
very unique....
I really love it
~inky hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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14 posted 2002-04-08 11:09 PM


What a family! Talent oozes from the two of you. I think that was an old Ray Charles song...Born to Ooze. Well, you certainly do...and magnificently!
Dulcinea
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15 posted 2002-04-08 11:13 PM


So that is where Krissy got the idea! Cool shape!
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16 posted 2002-04-08 11:17 PM


awesome shape poem marsha!
you talent definitely surpasses mine
(big hugs)

ShadowRider
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17 posted 2002-04-08 11:23 PM


Your Eyes Only

a patter of inkdrops
organized into labyrinth of cunning
a Poet's invitation:
are but for you to decipher
and for your eyes only

You and Krissy rock my world!  
WTG gals!  (way-to-go)
Jeff

Kethry
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18 posted 2002-04-09 06:39 AM


Marsha
paint for me a memory
quilled in perfect tapestry
shaped by love you have for me
and blended into charmony

shape your love through poetry
in your lovely gift for me
quill and ink can set me free
and raise for me a treasure tree.

Keth *Kiss*

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Kit McCallum
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19 posted 2002-04-09 06:42 AM


Beautiful sentiments Marsha!  A delightful read and such a wonderful presentation ... excellent!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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20 posted 2002-04-09 12:40 PM


sis,

this is just beautiful! your creativity
just graces these pages of blue for all
to see...it's such a delight to have both
you and Krissy among us...i love watching
you two do "battle" you both have an
amazing talent and gift and i love you
both very much!!

take care.
amy  

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (04-09-2002 12:41 PM).]

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