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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The Stranger He wrote freed verse she paid his price he spoke like Sam Elliott who looked to his Kathryn for leading ways his mind strayed he wanted back his dusty days he said opposites attract and flicked his flame a little higher she nodded in assent then winged her way a little higher he blushed her along neither pushed nor pulled for his words had gently tooled initials carved there with care in the gold band she still wears |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Interesting, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
he blushed her along neither pushed nor pulled for his words had gently tooled initials carved there with care in the gold band she still wears ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Decaflame!! Oh my...how I enjoyed the visions this one conjured up! Wonderful write... *Boy am I smiling!* ~Hugs~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"he said opposites attract and flicked his flame a little higher" Deca, you do have a flair..enjoyed this. The ending surprised me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh so smooth...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
don't ya just hate it when an ex shows up? some lovely images in this enjoyed the dance you did Deca |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Decaflame - this is good, I enjoying reading the words and thoughts put into this... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, just that thought of envisioning the initials carved on the 24-karat gold made me smile! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friedn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's some purty silver spurs kickin' in! I reckon he is some kind of wild cowboy riding in that saddle. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sy, I'm always pleased when I can catch your eye, thank you... Enchantress, when you have all the magic, conjuring is the least one can do...thanks! Interloper, the one word man...thanks... Martie, surprises are good, yes? Thanks! JamesMichael, smooth is good, no? Yes! Thanks! DS - Ex[something] indeed...you look deep, that is good. Thanks! Bill, glad you enjoyed, it was a fun write, thank you... Noah, your words are ever enlightening, thank you... Blues, aren't all cowboys tall in the saddle? Thank you! |
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