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The faith to walk on water
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The faith to walk on water |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Stress factors seriously rend the stronghold, a day long fight barely maintains equilibrium. Too close to the edge of sanity it has before been pushed and too tightly it has held on to keep from going over on the edge of self control. The orb rolls over the multi dimensional fabric up down back forth and over again it cannot stop its attempts to orbit the middle to hide near the pretense of normal. But then this…lacerated middle with edges that no longer withstand this is more than cohesion can counter. Repair attempts bleed futility Help is more than necessary… The hand offered lifts the oppression together hovering above trembling - territory never before traversed - to let go is to sink. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The hand offered lifts the oppression together hovering above trembling - territory never before traversed - to let go is to sink. Then hold on tightly, dear friend... to one who will not let you sink. *S* Just because the territory is unfamiliar doesn't mean it shouldn't become second nature to you... after you've tippytoed across the seas, you may even find yourself in flight. *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you lady, you always know just how to read me, on another board which I am not blocked from due to our friendly internet police, I got a comment of eerie..and you know me, I wondered if I missed the mark with this, but when I read your comments, I know I got it right  and yeppers, am hoping that the next step after hovering is soaring |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I always knew Suthern could speak jellybean...and so can I. Loud and clear, dear lady...Hang on and don't let go... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Always hang on to those who trust never to let you go, sweet friend, this is a wonderful poem of the search for faith! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
james, not sure if that is good or bad, but would rather be interesting than not *grin* bal, yeppers I know you can...sometimes my poems are rather personal, and so I hide them behind metaphors and poetic license, but those who know me...read 'me'...thank you noah.....thank you for your kind hug and wishes |
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