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God's love's in her heart
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God's love's in her heart |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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God's Love's in her heart. Pondering, pondering who should I say I'll love you, my darling; lead me your way Walk a new journey forever in love Living in happiness in God, above. Girl one lives single, a home on the sea Drinks of finer wine; pretty as can be A life of freshness in softness she sighs Following eagles, and sea gulls that fly. She thinks there's no God, man myths does she see She once took a shine to poor godly me Live's free as the breeze, a beautiful girl With long flowing hair, a wonderful pearl. Girl two lives married, a house by the hills Struggles from abuse, misery and pills She searches for God and struggles to live Helps ev'ry body, she searches and gives. Her children are angels, pure shining glows Shared with an ex she no longer knows And searches to find God's way to new peace Living in agony, she seeks release. Both girls are treasures, girl one I must part Girl two is my choice, God's Love's in her heart. God's Love's in her heart. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-08-2002 11:22 AM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I don't know at all what to say, but I wanted you to know I read this piece. I guess we just have to remember who will be blessed eternally. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, VAS. When others are blessed by our love on earth we receive our true rewards in eternity.  ((VAS)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done my friend |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you! ((Interloper)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Well now this was awesome Newell, Girl 2 must be a real jewel, and of course she is she has God in her heart. Lovely, floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi floria, thanks for you sweet thoughts. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy what an utterly absolutely beautiful piece of writing this is darling heart it’s exquisite. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again HIS light inspires such divine writing in you darling heart, your love for HIM clearly rings through this wonderful beautiful poem. Girl 2 will live in love eventually Girl 1 I’ll pray will find The Way. Excellent writing absolutely excellent I love it utterly utterly utterly.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you for your soothing words of honey Marsha, sweet pen of my heart. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Interesting and enlightening, Newell. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Sandra! ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Newell - this is one of the most touching poems I have read. God's love is not only in her heart, it is also in yours... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Bill. That is probably the nicest thing that anyone has ever said to me. The poem is only fictional, although it is based on real life inspiration. ((BC)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, yes, and I agree with Bill, you too have a heart that is rich in His love like Girl #2! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always sunshine to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts! ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Newell, what can I say besides you have the heart of an angel, and the words that are magic to the ears. You are surely an inspiration to me, and to MANY others here and everywhere. I hope Girl two gives you all the love you so deserve and more. She sure knows you are one blessed MAN with that heart of yours and the way you present it to people. God shines in you all the way and NEVER change. For, you shine, and believe me, you shine! From my heart to yours, Newell, love ya beyond words, My Friend. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Sauni. I am deeply humbled and honored by your kind words, friend. You are a wonderful person full of much love. ((Sauni)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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