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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-04-08 11:05 AM



Aware Of A  Sunnier side

Would revenge be sweet
Or perhaps just a waste
Would I feel much better
If I clear the bitter taste

Ridding the aches inside
Will revenge be my cure
Annoyed by displeasure
I could no longer endure

If I poured out my heart
Would it help me repair
Could revenge fix a hurt
Or create more despair

Resolving  heart  matters
Bringing the end to grief  
I had thought of revenge
Then sought comic relief

Aware of a sunnier side
Laughter removing pain
Grinners always prosper
Heart will sweeten again


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-08 11:09 AM


HopeS,
A lovely and exceptional write. Your talent is showing.

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-04-08 11:14 AM


Thanks Seymour
your reply is always glowing
Hope

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3 posted 2002-04-08 03:00 PM


"Aware of a sunnier side
Laughter removing pain
Grinners always prosper
Heart will sweeten again"




(smiles) Yes, yes, may your golden heart always come back with a vengeance and find all the joy and laughter your heart deserves so very much! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully upbeat, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-08 03:20 PM


Big smiles for your "discovery."

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5 posted 2002-04-08 04:55 PM


So many times we have to laugh to keep from crying... and even if it doesn't help us much, it's more pleasant for those around us. *S* I like this very much, Hope... may the grins continue. *S*
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6 posted 2002-04-09 04:02 PM


revenge is nice...laughter is good. I don't know which I'd pick, in a given situation. Nice write!
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7 posted 2002-04-09 05:08 PM


Revenge sounds sweet right about now, but that always fades away and the bright side does always come along so I guess I'd be better off with that..anyways great read

Kristen

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