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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-08 08:58 AM


“CHANGING PLACES”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I often wondered if we
were to change places,
and I were you, and
you were me, if you
would then know how
my heart weeps…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Krissy
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1 posted 2002-04-08 09:04 AM


Bill hi there welcome back home, YOU were missed you know. This is an excellent poem from you, you are a very superior writer. You write so well about romance and hearts, I wish I had a little of your talent. This is wonderful writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Charisma
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2 posted 2002-04-08 09:42 AM


your pen translated feelings from your heart quite well.....

((warm hugs))
Charisma

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-04-08 02:37 PM


I believe so ...

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4 posted 2002-04-08 02:53 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, you by far one of the most romantic and sensitive friends I've ever had, this made me cry too because I know this feeling. I love my Joanna so so much and I always feel as though we are the same person inside, and the only difference is I'm a boy and she's a girl, and just thinking how she thinks for me makes me cry in joy! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, she is so very lucky to have a true compassionate lover like you, we all love you so much! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-08 03:03 PM


but yet. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-04-08 03:11 PM


Bill,
Perhaps, perhaps, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-04-08 03:57 PM


Yes, I suppose I would...
Well done Bill...
love these short thoughts.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2002-04-08 05:00 PM


Bill...I've often thought how unique it would be to exchange lives, places,with someone else.  Then to know and experience all they feel. WONDERFUL POEM!!!  A poem of the heart and the soul.
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9 posted 2002-04-08 06:08 PM


Bill this is a great idea, Oh wouldn't it be nice if that could happen and people could then see how they treat us. I read a book once,where they said that when you die, you will "feel" all the hurt you put on others. I always wonder if this is true, and you'd better believe I am carefull. I don't want a whole lot of this stuff waiting for me. LOL..nice serious heartfelt write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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