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Always A Tempting
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Always A Tempting |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Tempting I hold back my desires, in longing for you, to savor what we already have. My will power is lessened everyday, as I lean towards your words to hear them more clearly, my mind wishing to define them my way. I like examining you, your motives always unknown, but enticing, inviting the truth of my body, its mechanics becoming skilled to your touch. But... I am in need of repair, reconditioning to your fit, needing to adjust my fashions to wear a new suit, yours. You can tailor me, alter the fit, my short to your tall and with purpose, perhaps, the measurements of the night will accommodate us after all. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-08-2002 09:48 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
you have an amazing way with words. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - always will you be one of the best. Most beautiful poem of thoughts and your feelings... Well done Maureen... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry, the words that come are from the thoughts of another...most often surprising myself with what I will write *s thank you hugss M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now this is absolutely a magnificent write! What wonderful weaving you do with words when you are happy  I love it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill..thank you..I try to write what I am feeling at the moment..sometimes it works..and sometimes..well *s M Interloper, I am always happy, especially to see your uplifting comments *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, may your love always fill you with joy and give you all the right measurements of love and make your heart an absolute fit! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I am in need of repair, reconditioning to your fit, needing to adjust my fashions to wear a new suit, yours. I think this is so very well written, Maureen. ~hugs tailored just for you~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love this Maureen..mmmmmmm...you said it well...hugss ~Victoria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There you go Maureen, Once you know how to paralell park it... you're in!!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a beautiful write, Maureen, the last lines making it such a gift of the heart... |
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