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Spiders Fly on Silk Wire
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Spiders Fly on Silk Wire |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
twas a fireworks from within causing a wearing that was thin icy feeling amidst the din and when you finally decided to begin, the rolling and tumbling shore did kick in..... spiders do fly I'll tell ya why cause there is no how or feeling that yer gonna bow....down and kiss momma earth for you are all that it's worth the crystal salt of all that burns with mindlessly imagined hurt..... next time ya see this chance to sail the smitten sea, waters of say, "let's just let it be" she's so beautiful walking the point with me yet lurking round the bend comin' from within is the feeling for the friend the one I do till the bitter end plan that never had an implore except the one that led to Baltimore....Mark Coburn |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
For some reason this reminded me of the fourth of July and watching the glorious sky light up the beach! Cool poem! |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
that's wild cause i started the poem using the 4th of july and changed it to fireworks and i rarely do that...thanx for reading my poem ....mark |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, I too saw 4th of July fireworks explode in these words, you always amaze me! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the way this slides through your head. Enjoyed much. Sandra |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like this...I like the rhythm and the mood, the style..  K |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
That first stanza is fantastic! I liked it best. The flow and the rhyme were well woven. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Never been to Baltimore, enjoyed. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I hear a song in here... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice Mark..I will have to get down to see you soon...now that Spring is here, a walk around town would be nice *s Maureen |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
thank you all: noah your what it's all about my friend! sandra your words take me to my memories... thanks so much K and Vas and seymor Soleil noir perhaps I will perform this with the band I jam with...... Maureen...Baltimore is a walking town Fells pt. Federal Hill....the Inner Harbor...it's what makes me tick..... |
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