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Dee
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0 posted 2002-04-07 07:27 PM



Come Home Soon

You’ve touched our hearts gently
with subtle words of rhyme.
Your cadence perfect,
the beat always in time.
You have shown us your heart
with your messages clear.
Telling us heartfelt stories
which we all love to hear.
Loving pictures painted,
images we can see,
complimented by rhyme,
haunting us, magically.
Awaiting your return
to these pages of blue,
with anticipation
and love for all you do.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

© Copyright 2002 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-04-07 07:34 PM


Such a bond can certainly be developed with
another...and such a beautiful expression
of appreciation for another...Nicely done
Dee....

Dee
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2 posted 2002-04-07 07:54 PM


Magnus, it is not hard to create a bond with another poet, is it? When hearts are laid bare you can't help but be drawn.
He is a wonderful poet and I respect all that he does.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-04-07 08:46 PM


Dee - a heartfelt tribune to a poet that has touched you. Wonderful, and very touching...

BC

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4 posted 2002-04-07 09:00 PM


Loving pictures painted,
images we can see,
complimented by rhyme,
haunting us, magically.

Poetry is all that and more,
full of anticipation and self expression.
It is a universal language and yet
we're all uique in our own right (write)
This was just great Dee~

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5 posted 2002-04-07 09:16 PM


very nice tribute to your poet friend
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6 posted 2002-04-07 09:20 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a wonderful tribute to a wonderful poet, sweet friend, I just know he will cherish this just as we all love your fabulous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dee, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-04-08 12:35 PM


beautifully said, I hope he hears you
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8 posted 2002-04-08 07:08 AM


Oh....me thinks he hears quite well  

this is very cool & sweet of you Dee-girlie, and very much appreciated, I'm sure  


"If each petal was a thanks ...
you would be swimming in a sea of Roses, with each one bringing a kiss to your cheek."




Dee
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9 posted 2002-04-08 07:56 AM


Brian, this poet is worth every word.

Lori, and it is as it should be.

RosePetal, thank you.

Noah, thanks for your always sweet replies.

Sue, I think he has a little bird who tells him everything

Janet, methinks you are right.
  "swimming in a sea of roses"....what a beautiful way of putting it.

thank you all,
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Kethry
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10 posted 2002-04-08 08:04 AM


Dee, what  a delightful tribute for the lost.
Beautifully done.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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11 posted 2002-04-08 08:06 AM


He is a lucky poet indeed to have such a fan as you, Dee. No doubt he will hear.....
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12 posted 2002-04-08 08:21 AM


Dee~

Very Lovely indeed....be well...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Dee
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13 posted 2002-04-08 08:43 AM


Keth, I hope it brings the lost home though.

'Deer, I think I am the lucky one.

Lauren, thank you.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Rick
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14 posted 2002-04-08 08:55 AM


Dear Dee, here you give for what we live, a cause and zest for life, sunshine to the soul and ink to a pen that writes for you.
A lovely tribute to your poet friend, I enjoyed the read.

Sincerely Rick

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15 posted 2002-04-08 09:10 AM


Dee hi there, it seems this is the day or the week for expressing how much we admire and delight in poets words. I’m sure he hears you and will return to write words of wonder here again. This is a wonderful tribute and I’m certain He is a fine very fine poet

Wonderful writing an excellent poem from you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Dee
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16 posted 2002-04-08 10:16 AM


Rick and Krissy, thank you both for your lovely words.


Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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17 posted 2002-04-08 11:17 AM


An excellent tribute, Dee... Hope that tumbleweed stops tumbling soon and lets the PIP fence catch him "fer a spell". *S*
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18 posted 2002-04-08 12:12 PM


Dee,
Don't know who the poet is but I'll send you a just in case.

Dee
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19 posted 2002-04-08 04:38 PM


Suthern, I really hope so too.

Seymore, thanks for the hug

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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20 posted 2002-04-09 01:29 AM


Dee~
You know I recognize this poet~
He's a jewel~
He'll be home 'soon' ?
Let's keep our fingers crossed~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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21 posted 2002-04-09 06:19 AM


Like "Deer" said...!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dee
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22 posted 2002-04-09 07:15 AM


Marge, I thought you might Fingers, toes, eyes are all crossed. Lol

Eddie, thanks my friend, glad you like

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Parker
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23 posted 2002-04-11 12:52 PM


We all get lost at times. I hope he finds his way. I'm sure with your wonderful words he'll be drawn back in.

Parker

*** Never fret the setting Sun cause in the night a billion more will come ***

Dee
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24 posted 2002-04-11 05:06 PM


Park, I am pretty sure he will come back, it is just a matter of when.
Glad to see you here.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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25 posted 2002-04-13 01:26 AM


ah..look at that...you reeled into this thread the very TWO poets i could think of that you mayve written this lovely tribute to...   and good to see the two of them...   very nice write for a friend miss dee...you are of good heart..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

Dee
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26 posted 2002-04-13 04:39 AM


Hey dg, nice to see you here. I, too, can see at least two names on here that would have to be on my list.  Seems you know me better than I realised.
Thanks for reading me again.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Larry C
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27 posted 2002-04-14 02:34 AM


Dee,
I wasn't gone that long! Just kidding. In fact this is a wonderful sentiment to share. I know we can all relate.

Dee
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28 posted 2002-04-14 05:59 PM


Larry, oh you were gone were you?
Glad you can relate to this.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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29 posted 2002-04-14 08:02 PM


He must have missed you too, Dee! Very nice.

~sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Dee
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30 posted 2002-04-15 05:11 AM


Sky, thanks for dropping in

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Mark Bohannan
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31 posted 2002-07-17 08:56 AM


Honey ... I'm home!!!! ROFL (not claiming this one, just wishing for that "soft home")
Look the archives work for me too.  Sometimes your heart just shines (well all the time actually) and I just wanted to tell you that this and all the other things you do to show appreciation to ALL those you come in contact with is why you are so very much loved.  You own a piece of my heart for sure so make sure you don't forget to do the upkeep on it.LOL  Wouldn't want the value to decline ya know. ~wink~
Hugs to you sweet poetess.

Recognize love for the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-17-2002 08:59 AM).]

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32 posted 2002-07-17 01:23 PM


Cool! I like the yearn of this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Dee
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33 posted 2002-07-18 10:22 PM


Hey there Mark, glad you got the message

Squirel, glad you liked it. I was missing a certain poet's words.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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