»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #20
»
Thank you
| Open Poetry #20 |
|
Thank you |
|
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
|
What can I say to you that isn’t already in your heart that isn’t already known in your soul, isn’t already carried in your hands to give away When you have the answers but still ask the questions what can I say but thank you for your trust |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved | |||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a truly beautiful way to express the sincere thanks for one..from one... I know this feeling well...Thank You for sharing this little gem... |
||
|
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Beautiful thoughts, Karilea. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful!... |
||
|
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A heartfelt thank you poem. floria Floria |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is a wonderful thank-you note for someone so special to you, sweet friend, this is fabulous, just as we all thank you for never changing the wonderful person you are to us all! (sigh) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sunshine...trust is so important...James |
||
|
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Trust is so important, Sunshine. I like this. |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - trust is important and I hope that the person gets to read this... BC |
||
|
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and thankyous should not be taken for granted Karilea, well meant!  |
||
|
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When you have the answers but still ask the questions what can I say but thank you for your trust A beautiful lesson in humility, Karilea  ~humble hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
||
|
Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Very Sweet!!! and well put. Love, Light and Peace Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So many think trust is their right... you recognize it for the gift it is... which means you appreciate the fragility of such a gift. *S* This is beautiful, Sunshine... I like it very much! |
||
|
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Karilea, Like this one a lot....Beautiful gem!!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
||
|
Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Ah, trust--the gift that makes a friendship. Thanks for posting this! Shenachie |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A warm lovely write. |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . this is very important. . . thanks is always welcome. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting finale. I will think on this |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
so fine ms shine enjoyed it |
||
|
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I really enjoyed reading your poem Sunshine... Indeed 'trust' is a precious gift... Hugs2UalwaysPoetFriend *~coco~* |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karilea Beautiful words from the kindest of hearts. Take care....Sue Suetang |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
|
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes its scary to trust...but sometimes you just have to go for it...James |
||
|
Raz Member
since 2002-04-30
Posts 51Quebec, Canada |
I'm new here but must say I'm left wanting with this. Fisrt, I would demand a question mark somewhere in the poem, as it is a question. The answer to these questions seems to be 'nothing'. I suggest concrete details, instances of the abstractions you mention. [This message has been edited by Raz (05-01-2002 05:35 AM).] |
||
|
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Karilea, this is so thought evoking, words so intence that the heart feels the ache and the soul the emotion. A thankyou as this is as much a gift as a gesture. Great write Karilea, much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
