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Open Poetry #20

Something Beautiful

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

0 posted 2002-04-07 05:32 PM

Deep in the shadows sweet dreams,
But nothing is as it seems.
Heart sinks with heavy sighs,
Now look into my eyes.
Tell me what you see,
A ragged beast of the dark.
I feel your pins piercing me,
Leave and let me be.
Tell me what you see,
A wasted life gone to Hell.
Tattoos,piercings and long hair,
Judge me by looks that's not fair.
Tell me what you see,
Something my kids will never be.
Living in the darkness of light,
Keeping myself far from sight.
Now tell me what YOU see,
The blind man says " I see something beautiful."
Something beautiful and something free..
That's how you could describe me.

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-04-07 05:34 PM

Interesting...James

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2002-04-07 07:49 PM

I too see something beautiful. We should in all people.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-04-08 08:17 PM

Good message here. I know that to write poetry, you must have love inside you,and if some people don't see it, they are missing out.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-08 10:28 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, may the true beauty of all our hearts shine out on paper and may that something beautiful always shimmer in every word of hope we write! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kane, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-04-08 11:06 PM

I think everyone is beautiful in their own unique way. Don't let anyone get you down, keep your head up. (hugs)

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