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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-07 04:19 PM




I Am Here

For a very dear friend of mine. You know who you are. Love ya!!

I'll be here to hold your hand
Try my best to understand
I know the tears that you cry at night
Have also been blessed by an Angels light

Your heart shines so brightly through the pain
I know sometimes how you just pray for rain
So that no one can see the truth of you
I'm just glad you opened up to me and care as you do

I am here for you, today and tomorrow too
To give you rainbows and chase away the blue
Life is hard, we both know the truth of this
We also know the beauty of happiness and bliss

Our paths crossed, and now here we are
We can be each other's shining star
So smile for me, as I extend one for you as well
In our hearts this new friendship will dwell

Last night when we talked, it was so special to me
You helped me realise some things, helped set me free
The beauty of it is you came to me to help end your
tears
In doing so you helped to release all my fears

I am here, I'll do the best I can for you
To show you a friend who is real and true
So place your hand in mine, together we can fly
So dry your eyes, no more tears will you cry




"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (04-07-2002 04:22 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-04-07 04:58 PM


Such a devotion of friendship...a bond that
should never be forgotten or broken...

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-04-07 05:14 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. The bond of true friendship is the kinship that comes from within a loving heart. You are always without fail a wonderful writer, in this you’ve blessed the bond of a loving friend with your beautiful words. OUTSTANDING writing darling, and I love it utterly

This poem is wonderful and so darling heart are you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


strbbux
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3 posted 2002-04-07 08:50 PM


Very nice heartfelt poem Aimster, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-04-07 08:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are one of the best friends all of us could ever ask for and you always delight our days with your love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you will always be a friend in me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-07 09:28 PM


awww amy, I can see that you are a very good friend to have! You pal will adore this beautiful poem.
(hugs)
RP

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-04-07 10:07 PM


Aimster - I'm sure they will feel the closeness of this poem that you wrote for them...

BC

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7 posted 2002-04-07 10:26 PM


Ahh Amy, you are such a good friend to this lucky person.  What a beautiful and inspirational poem!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Krissy
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8 posted 2002-04-08 09:00 AM


Amy aunt/ lil sis/ cousin this is really beautiful, whoever you wrote this for must be very proud, I know I would be.

Wonderful use of line length, internal rhythm and structure, I really think this is wonderful piece of writing from you. Your writing is evolving into something very very special, keep up the good work. I wub you lil sis, shush don’t tell mum I’m calling my aunt sis


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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9 posted 2002-04-08 02:25 PM


Ain't being a good friend gratifying?

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