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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-07 02:19 PM


Kissing The Heavens
By: Noah Eaton
4/7/02

O'er where cherry trees bear oriels for finches
Overlooking the grand junction of the rainbow
There you'll be, my lovebird of paradise
Whispering your ancient romance fortissimo

You are the China rose that centers my flowerbed
Bearing countless yellow roses of lustrous memories
Singing and humming in my heart like cherubs
Making me feel like a happy boy again, falling in love happily

You weave chinchilla smiles to my satin heart
You are my every tomorrow and every happy reminder of yesterday
Come to me, my love, I want to walk a thousand miles
Just to hold you and bring spring to your hearts everglades

Every time I feel your warm body rise
I feel with you I am nearly kissing the heavens holding you
And every time I see a rainbow shimmer across the horizon
I want to kiss your luscious lips, connecting the ends of destinys rainbow
Falling in love with you, forever...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-07-2002 02:21 PM).]

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Ivy Rose
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1 posted 2002-04-07 02:23 PM


Noah...GORGEOUS POEM!!! I know Joanna will love it and cherish it forever.  Your writing skill always amazes me and makes me sigh just a little deeper.   ***Ivy Rose
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-04-07 02:33 PM


I know what you mean Noah...I feel like my girlfriend is a blessing from heaven...James
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3 posted 2002-04-07 03:25 PM


Noah this is sooo beautiful!
Your writing ability never ceases to amaze me!
~Hugs sweetie~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-04-07 04:21 PM


noah...your positive (+) vibrations and love of love, I mean the state of love.....shine!
arthur
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5 posted 2002-04-07 04:46 PM


hi
still looking for love Noah
arnt we all
arnt we all
arthur

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6 posted 2002-04-07 05:27 PM


You weave chinchilla smiles to my satin heart''

Wow....you just have that lovers glow surrounding you...and it shows....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-04-07 05:47 PM


Noah - wow, this is most romantic my friend. I hope she reads this, as there is no way she would ever resist. My, my, a lovely, most lovely write...

BC

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8 posted 2002-04-07 08:45 PM


Oh my Noah what a wonderful thought, Kissing the heavens, great poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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By the Seaside
9 posted 2002-04-07 08:54 PM


O'er where cherry trees bear oriels for finches
Overlooking the grand junction of the rainbow
There you'll be, my lovebird of paradise

You speak the language of love so well dear Noah.  
Enjoyed the delicate splendor in your poem.

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10 posted 2002-04-07 09:25 PM


hey baby! You are my modern day shakespeare, and I appreciate you very much.
You always make me smile in happiness.

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11 posted 2002-04-07 10:36 PM


Noah, your love  shines throughout these pages, like a beacon of light.
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-04-07 10:50 PM


We seem to have rainbows in common tonight, Noah...Lovely Poem!!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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13 posted 2002-04-08 10:02 AM


Noah you weave with love feelings from the heart. So good to know you're happy and to see how love inspire you to write awesome gems.

((hugs))
Charisma

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14 posted 2002-04-08 10:37 AM


I love reading your words Noah..this was so lovely dear one...hugsss

                  ~Victoria

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15 posted 2002-04-08 11:07 AM


Noah,
Exceptional write, may your bird of happiness
always sit in your nest of weave.

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Deep in the heart
16 posted 2002-04-08 02:45 PM


If you kiss the heavens you will get stardust in your hair

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17 posted 2002-04-09 04:50 PM


Your words ooze with sweetness, she is very lucky to have someone love her as much as you do Gives me hope that there are some nice, sweet, sincere men out there...

Kristen

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18 posted 2002-04-09 08:14 PM


"...I want to kiss your luscious lips, connecting the ends of destinys rainbow
Falling in love with you, forever..."

Oh, Oh, Oh!  If only someone would write words like these to me. You are such the great romantic and such the awesome writer. Hugs, Marti

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19 posted 2002-04-09 08:16 PM


Wonderful...
Ariana
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20 posted 2002-04-09 09:53 PM


Noah:  When Joanna reads this, I hope you will be ready.  Very sweet words.
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21 posted 2002-04-09 09:59 PM



*sighs* Noah, you write fantasy romance so well

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

DawnG
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22 posted 2002-04-09 10:54 PM


This is a beautiful poem Noah. Thank you for sharing with us.

                     Dawn

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