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metaphors for all manner of things you've broken into |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
i am pondering, now the validity of the phrase “hearts can’t be blasted open” if you are detrition or explosion and how i am slowly building brick by brick a dam to close this sea [This message has been edited by howpeculiar (04-07-2002 01:49 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Great title and the ending was perfect. I can appreciate where you're coming from. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This presents a powerful visual HowPeculiar ... very much enjoyed ... and Welcome to Passions!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! This is indeed very powerful, sweet friend, you have discussed your thoughts on this quote so wonderfully! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
'i am pondering, now the validity of the phrase “hearts can’t be blasted open” if you are detrition or explosion and how i am slowly building brick by brick a dam to close this sea' Well this is short...amazing how one can say a lot sometimes without words..or with just a few. Hey...this is my 6666 post..does that make me part devil-girl? Hugs, howpeculiar, somehow - I think you need them.. K |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
perfect, powerful, and hugs... ~smile~ much more than i'd have ever expected from this small scraping. thank you all, be well. K: I don't think so, but 666 is the combo on my bike chain; perhaps we are both luscious demon-damsels, irresistible to creatures of flesh and phantom, repellent to 1.5 ton vehicles. We even open doors for the males of the species... oh, well nm, I guess that statement does it: we are of the dark powers, presuming we can open door handles ourselves and such. Excuse me, I must go faint and redeem myself. [This message has been edited by howpeculiar (04-08-2002 06:18 PM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
whatever the means or whichever is the most damaging-- the dam is the important thing now. this one made me think too much. J |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Definitely Enjoyed this |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
LOL ... hugs, J ~big grin~ ... and I agree. The Dam. most certainly the dam. RP, you caught me as I was replying to J  . Thanks.[This message has been edited by howpeculiar (04-08-2002 10:59 PM).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Jamie and I know about dams intimately..don't we J? Have you redeemed yourself? Is that at all possible??? Huggles... be well, do some yoga or something... heh  K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
that we do..... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
in many things there are truths - this no less than others. C |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The flood...does it need to be channeled, or could it just create a new landscape? A poem of thought, yours and mine. Thank you. |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
er... the Zen of C?  Martie... oh. Oh, THANK YOU... your response has given many nights of turning ... ~smile~ in good ways. be well. |
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