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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
in poetry not every line should be “Ka-Pow!” we need the ebb and flow of love of ideas of pleasure of visions otherwise we’ll only end up feeling Punch Drunk! and black and blue true? ©April 7, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Yep yep yep, and the magic of poetry is that we can always connect words and have them flow just this way to creatively getting to that final KA-POW! (smiles) This is a wonderful way of looking at poetry, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How true~~ Poetry is a vision indeed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think every word should be ka-pow...actually we all have our own unique way of sharing the thoughts from within...poetry seems to reveal our desires and priorities...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Surely, surely, we need that soft swing of a summer's hammock...enjoyed this, Virginia... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - how true this is... BC |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done, VAS. So true indeed. All writing comes |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Well said, Virginia. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virginia....oh yes indeed we do.... Maybe that is why I get up all puffy eyed in the morning... Thanks for this one! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How true Virginia! Excellent thoughts here! ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAhahahaha Hi VAS, yep, I do think I am punch drunk now.I truly enjoyed this truthful poem. floria Floria |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh hah! So you mean every line and every letter doesn't have to be a marker for brilliance? No wonder I have a headache. LOL! Loved this little statement.  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Agreed!!! some poetry should only whisper... to be heard all the better... Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you don't want ka-pow ka-pow shouldn't be in here but ka-pow is good ~*~ I guess I don't get the idea |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
VAS~ hehehe...true! Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
VAS, geesh, i don't know..it's hard to just let myself go and write...words have so many meanings and i am always searching for the right words that can express how i feel best... when i look at my earlier writings, i cringe in horror at how pretentious and wordy and dramatic my words were...i think the thought of being an aspiring poet just went to my head...LOL  |
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